Heart oil
Keep the heart lubricated with ample love6 total reviews
Comment from HarryT
Great pic to go with few words to get your message across. Do you know where I can get some of that oil? Thanks for thoughtful presentation and an entertaining read.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Great pic to go with few words to get your message across. Do you know where I can get some of that oil? Thanks for thoughtful presentation and an entertaining read.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Many thanks:))
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, in just eight syllables, you've created a poem, and your message is clear. Author, it's not easy to write a poem in eight syllables
that sounds poetic and not like a sentence. Well done. Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Hello author, in just eight syllables, you've created a poem, and your message is clear. Author, it's not easy to write a poem in eight syllables
that sounds poetic and not like a sentence. Well done. Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thanks
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!
You are now leading with 9 votes.
Love is the most important sentiment we can feel
. a loving heart brings on other beautiful emotions like joy, happiness .. and they get projected onto those around us.
Is there such a thing as a heart that doesn't love ?
People like Hitler he let darkness, evilness swallow his heart and we can see what happened ...the destruction it caused.
But generally speaking , those people that don't seem to love is because they were hurt by someone they loved , so they shut down and stop listening to their heart desires . .. cause a heart is there to love.
One must overcome this numb stage and give love another chance .
I believe there is a lid for every teapot , a match that will make everyone feel whole.
You offer an original and poetic way to speak about our heart and the love and care it needs to thrive.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Ciao poet!
You are now leading with 9 votes.
Love is the most important sentiment we can feel
. a loving heart brings on other beautiful emotions like joy, happiness .. and they get projected onto those around us.
Is there such a thing as a heart that doesn't love ?
People like Hitler he let darkness, evilness swallow his heart and we can see what happened ...the destruction it caused.
But generally speaking , those people that don't seem to love is because they were hurt by someone they loved , so they shut down and stop listening to their heart desires . .. cause a heart is there to love.
One must overcome this numb stage and give love another chance .
I believe there is a lid for every teapot , a match that will make everyone feel whole.
You offer an original and poetic way to speak about our heart and the love and care it needs to thrive.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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I agree - the hearts job is to love.
Those who are pure of heart understand how to love, how to be loved.
People like hitler let their hearts become calloused, tarnished by hatred, power lust.
Thank you for kindly reviewing :))
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
This is a very lovely poem.
Clear concept. Precise theme.
Heartfelt message that I pick up on: Restore, revive, rejuvenate and protect. Oil is the attention the heart needs to make love sparkle again.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Hello,
This is a very lovely poem.
Clear concept. Precise theme.
Heartfelt message that I pick up on: Restore, revive, rejuvenate and protect. Oil is the attention the heart needs to make love sparkle again.
Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much :))
Comment from victor 66
You use words that have a double meaning and I believe that's always appreciated by other people who try to write. Your 2-4-2 poem is very good and most timely. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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You use words that have a double meaning and I believe that's always appreciated by other people who try to write. Your 2-4-2 poem is very good and most timely. Best wishes.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you friend:))
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You are welcome, mystery writer.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I have now read every entry in this particular 2.4.2 contest and have wholeheartily made the decision to vote for yours. *smile*
As I read, I thought there was another that held my favor -- but you blew it out of the water. This whole presentation was unique, bold, and inspiring. The message was simple and one we are familiar with but expressed in a new and very creative way. I really hope the other voters see what I see. Go get 'em! Good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I have now read every entry in this particular 2.4.2 contest and have wholeheartily made the decision to vote for yours. *smile*
As I read, I thought there was another that held my favor -- but you blew it out of the water. This whole presentation was unique, bold, and inspiring. The message was simple and one we are familiar with but expressed in a new and very creative way. I really hope the other voters see what I see. Go get 'em! Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words Robyn - they mean a lot
:)))
