War Sadness
A lune 5-3-510 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good choice of artwork, Chris.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You do a good job with the lune and topic.
-The imagery shows the grave impacts of war.
-Both sides are impacted, especially by
death and destruction.
-Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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-Good choice of artwork, Chris.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You do a good job with the lune and topic.
-The imagery shows the grave impacts of war.
-Both sides are impacted, especially by
death and destruction.
-Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Hi Pam Thank you and yes that was my contribution to this very sad event and to all horrible wars no winners ever
Cheers for your good luck wishes also Chris
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You are very welcome, Chris. I managed to see another, too!
Comment from royowen
There are indications that the Soviet bullying ambitions are coming to nought, they expected little opposition, but even the regular Soviet soldier had been lied to, but you're right Chris, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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There are indications that the Soviet bullying ambitions are coming to nought, they expected little opposition, but even the regular Soviet soldier had been lied to, but you're right Chris, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Hi Roy Thanks and what a tragic event all round. We are so fortunate to live here, but one can only hope it ends soon
Cheers Chris
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Well done Chris
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Thumbs up
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Of course, almost invariably, someone--some country or faction--will be declared the winner, the one with the most shallow river of bloodshed! Your poem is very expressive, realistic, and timely.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Of course, almost invariably, someone--some country or faction--will be declared the winner, the one with the most shallow river of bloodshed! Your poem is very expressive, realistic, and timely.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Hi Janice Thank you and it seems the bloodshed is increasing When will we ever learn ?
Just needed to say something
Cheers Chris
Comment from jessizero
And with those eleven words, you have said it all. It's very true. Thank you for sharing your insights with the community. Keep up the good work! Best wishes.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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And with those eleven words, you have said it all. It's very true. Thank you for sharing your insights with the community. Keep up the good work! Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Hi Jessi Thanks for your review and something the less said is more powerful
I will try
Cheers Chris
Comment from lyenochka
So very true. In this war declared by that madman, everyone suffers including his own people and I hope his people will stop him from doing any more damage! Best wishes in the contest!
Good to see you back, Christine! Hope all is well!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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So very true. In this war declared by that madman, everyone suffers including his own people and I hope his people will stop him from doing any more damage! Best wishes in the contest!
Good to see you back, Christine! Hope all is well!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Hi Helen Thank you and yes all well here , but feeling sad for all mixed up in this terrible war
Lets hope it ends soon for everyone?s sake
Many Cheers to you Chris
Comment from Sally Carter
Very powerful. And although the picture is amazing, the poem stands equally well on words alone.
I'm pretty unfamiliar with these various short forms, but seems to me you have achieved a great effect with so few syllables. I like it!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Very powerful. And although the picture is amazing, the poem stands equally well on words alone.
I'm pretty unfamiliar with these various short forms, but seems to me you have achieved a great effect with so few syllables. I like it!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Hi Sally Thank you very much for taking the time to review this Lune. I think the secret is to create an image with words but as we like pictured poetry here I always try to find an image to suit and Cleo85 has great choices to use
Glad you like this and lets hope this war and all wars end soon
Cheers Chris
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes for the Lune Poetry contest, Christine. The picture was awesome yet so sad. And your words expressed so much anger at the effects of war-death, that happens to all of us when it is time-just not so unexpectantly. Very well done, sadly but greatly enjoyed.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Good luck wishes for the Lune Poetry contest, Christine. The picture was awesome yet so sad. And your words expressed so much anger at the effects of war-death, that happens to all of us when it is time-just not so unexpectantly. Very well done, sadly but greatly enjoyed.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Hi Alie Thanks for your review and one can only watch from afar with a heavy heart for both sides Surely this senseless war must end
Man really learns nothing all the time
Cheers Chrisx
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You are so very welcome, Christine. I totally agree that Man never learns the price of war. Perhaps he should.
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One can only hope Alie
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That is so true.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You're right, the only one who doesn't understand this, is Putin. He is a maniac, and should be locked away for good. As you say, there are no other words are needed. Good luck in the contest, my friend, your Lune poem speaks volumes. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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You're right, the only one who doesn't understand this, is Putin. He is a maniac, and should be locked away for good. As you say, there are no other words are needed. Good luck in the contest, my friend, your Lune poem speaks volumes. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Hi Sandra Thanks and agreed Yes I can?t understand why we don?t have world leaders who we can admire. A sad world at the moment . No winners here
As always Cheers and hugs back x Chris
Comment from jaded831
All the leaders of the world should read your poem. I can't comprehend what goes on in the minds of some people. No body wins. War creates sadness, death and pain, we the people suffer. We should be helping each other, not hurting.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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All the leaders of the world should read your poem. I can't comprehend what goes on in the minds of some people. No body wins. War creates sadness, death and pain, we the people suffer. We should be helping each other, not hurting.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Hi jaded831 Thank you for your review and encouraging comments and what great sadness both sides face. There are never winners only heartbroken families
Cheers for your support Chris
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Lune poetry contest entry, you executed it well. Thoughts are with Ukraine. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Lune poetry contest entry, you executed it well. Thoughts are with Ukraine. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Hi 13thpoet. Thank you for your reply and good luck wish
And lets hope this war ends soon
Cheers Chris