Now I See Me
Catching up with my life...49 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
If these are your crazy thoughts, then my mind is surely fractured. Congratulations on this outstanding contest winner! Anyone can put words on paper, but it's the way someone thinks that sets the hook. Outstanding! Thanks for sharing. I wish I had a six.
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If these are your crazy thoughts, then my mind is surely fractured. Congratulations on this outstanding contest winner! Anyone can put words on paper, but it's the way someone thinks that sets the hook. Outstanding! Thanks for sharing. I wish I had a six.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This mirror poem, Now I See Me, brings the readers to that moment as the reflection seems critical. That same image conjures up the better life lived and the positive outlook ahead. Nice.
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This mirror poem, Now I See Me, brings the readers to that moment as the reflection seems critical. That same image conjures up the better life lived and the positive outlook ahead. Nice.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
Comment from godlucifer
i think it depends if you were a good kid or bad kid. some can say the reflection of their past was good or bad. sometime looking in the mirror will wake a person up from that reality. your poem was written with a talent. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
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i think it depends if you were a good kid or bad kid. some can say the reflection of their past was good or bad. sometime looking in the mirror will wake a person up from that reality. your poem was written with a talent. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
Comment from joann r romei
Powerful poem, one in which we all can relate to, I try not to look into the mirror to much because it does evoke the emotions mentioned in the poem. no errors noted and ty for sharing, well done
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Powerful poem, one in which we all can relate to, I try not to look into the mirror to much because it does evoke the emotions mentioned in the poem. no errors noted and ty for sharing, well done
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
Comment from victor 66
The way I relate to your poem, is because of my age. In two months I'll be 75 years old. Looking in the mirror, is not necessarily pleasant for an older person. For it seems like it was just a few years ago that I was so much younger. But one has to recall, all of the good that occurred during those years. And perhaps, as I do, they walk away with a slight smile. Good luck in the contest.
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The way I relate to your poem, is because of my age. In two months I'll be 75 years old. Looking in the mirror, is not necessarily pleasant for an older person. For it seems like it was just a few years ago that I was so much younger. But one has to recall, all of the good that occurred during those years. And perhaps, as I do, they walk away with a slight smile. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a beautiful Piece. It flowed well and the feeling of a broken life rang through from beginning to end. I wish you much success with the contest.
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This is a beautiful Piece. It flowed well and the feeling of a broken life rang through from beginning to end. I wish you much success with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
Comment from Ulla
Yes, as the contest is called mirror, mirror, I could continue with famous: 'Mirror, mirror on the wall'.
Yes, sometimes we look at ourselves and reflect on the life we'd let and who we've become.
I really liked your poem. It's a great entry. Good luck. Ulla:)))
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Yes, as the contest is called mirror, mirror, I could continue with famous: 'Mirror, mirror on the wall'.
Yes, sometimes we look at ourselves and reflect on the life we'd let and who we've become.
I really liked your poem. It's a great entry. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
Comment from Sanku
Coming to terms with oneself and knowing trying to turn a new life...I liked this entry to the contest very much .The wry smile says much ...all the best for the contest.
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Coming to terms with oneself and knowing trying to turn a new life...I liked this entry to the contest very much .The wry smile says much ...all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
Comment from LisaMay
Your words capture a moment of self reflection where maturity suddenly illuminates past battles of self doubt, viewing your storied past, but now able to focus on the future. This is very well written and will probably win.
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Your words capture a moment of self reflection where maturity suddenly illuminates past battles of self doubt, viewing your storied past, but now able to focus on the future. This is very well written and will probably win.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Well done in describing how self-perception can change when one sheds the noise of other people's judgments and fully embracing the "light that shines through in golden rays" and casts out illusions of self.
Hope you do well in the contest!
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Well done in describing how self-perception can change when one sheds the noise of other people's judgments and fully embracing the "light that shines through in golden rays" and casts out illusions of self.
Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022