Unwelcomed War
for the contest Personification2 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Sorry. I got lost somewhere along the way but finished the reading asking about... "I wrapped an old blanket around my shoulders enjoying the smell and warmth mom." ??? smell and warmth mom .... what? ... use to provide?
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Sorry. I got lost somewhere along the way but finished the reading asking about... "I wrapped an old blanket around my shoulders enjoying the smell and warmth mom." ??? smell and warmth mom .... what? ... use to provide?
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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thanks, laughing...
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smell and warmth (of) mom...
The blanket felt like mom...
I think it's pretty straight forward...
Purification is giving voice to things like air and making them seem human. The blanket reminded her of mom's smell and warmth like she was wrapped in her arms...
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is an action-packed short story. You need an (a) before the word (appeared) Otherwise it is perfect and an excellent entry for the contest. I love the artwork you added as it adds much to the subject of the writing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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This is an action-packed short story. You need an (a) before the word (appeared) Otherwise it is perfect and an excellent entry for the contest. I love the artwork you added as it adds much to the subject of the writing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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I am not sure where? Do you mean here?
I questioned, as I quickly escaped into my welcoming old closet which appeared me to be holding out it's arms to welcome me inside.
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Sorry, my bad. I must have read it wrong. Please accept my apology. I read so many every day that my mind gets fuzzy. Time to quit for a while. LOL