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Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Bee Gin"Children Stories from the Heart.
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Comment from Kayte Ray
This is well done. I struggle with reading the longer pieces but this is broken up and flows nicely. Good work. You present the characters well and events are easy to keep up with.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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This is well done. I struggle with reading the longer pieces but this is broken up and flows nicely. Good work. You present the characters well and events are easy to keep up with.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Well I'm so glad I wrote this so that you would enjoy it
Kayte.
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Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a comparative statistics of the inputs made for the wellbeing of the insect community by Bizzy Wuzzy and Wazzy Wuzzy.
The work highlights the introduction of the show by its anchor person, Annie; her introduction of Bizzy in an outing of overt antagonisms and the
theme of togetherness, which characterized that of Wazzy that eventually attracted Buzzy to become his friend; finally Lloyd sums Buzzy as greedy, while tagging Wazzy as an epitome of togetherness, collecting, and socializing. In other words, a community should try to get along, abhor arguing and fighting, and as a corollary, establish an all right society.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of alliteration, onomatopoeia and an array of anecdotes synonymous with fanfare.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a comparative statistics of the inputs made for the wellbeing of the insect community by Bizzy Wuzzy and Wazzy Wuzzy.
The work highlights the introduction of the show by its anchor person, Annie; her introduction of Bizzy in an outing of overt antagonisms and the
theme of togetherness, which characterized that of Wazzy that eventually attracted Buzzy to become his friend; finally Lloyd sums Buzzy as greedy, while tagging Wazzy as an epitome of togetherness, collecting, and socializing. In other words, a community should try to get along, abhor arguing and fighting, and as a corollary, establish an all right society.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of alliteration, onomatopoeia and an array of anecdotes synonymous with fanfare.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thanks Lloyd.
I really enjoy writing fairy tales and and stories for children.
Ricky
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Remain Blessed.
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Remain Blessed.