I Recall
Spring and all...13 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely tribute to your mother and to the special memories you shared with her as you reflected on your past times together. You have rhymed it all with ease and smoothness. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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A lovely tribute to your mother and to the special memories you shared with her as you reflected on your past times together. You have rhymed it all with ease and smoothness. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much for this great review. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is absolutely beautiful. What a lovely tribute to your mom.beautuful flow and rhyme scheme. Makes me think of my mom lost her two years ago. She loved her gardening as well. Very proud over her flowers. well done.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This is absolutely beautiful. What a lovely tribute to your mom.beautuful flow and rhyme scheme. Makes me think of my mom lost her two years ago. She loved her gardening as well. Very proud over her flowers. well done.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful entry for the Rhyming contest writing prompt contest.
The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
I like the heartfelt story about your mom. It's sad but you will always have her with you in your heart.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Beautiful entry for the Rhyming contest writing prompt contest.
The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
I like the heartfelt story about your mom. It's sad but you will always have her with you in your heart.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this nice review and your kind words. :)
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful poetic tribute to the memory of your mother. I enjoyed your smooth rhyming pattern and descriptive imagery. My favorite lines are: "There by her side, we'd walk for miles, the birds above would bring us smiles." It reminds me of walks I had with my mom. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This is a beautiful poetic tribute to the memory of your mother. I enjoyed your smooth rhyming pattern and descriptive imagery. My favorite lines are: "There by her side, we'd walk for miles, the birds above would bring us smiles." It reminds me of walks I had with my mom. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, I'm so glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I'm sorry you've lost your mom - that's a hard thing to face, no matter what age you are. (At least, that's my take on it. --wink--)
But I love that you shared your memories and some of the things that y'all enjoyed doing together. Memories are forever!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I'm sorry you've lost your mom - that's a hard thing to face, no matter what age you are. (At least, that's my take on it. --wink--)
But I love that you shared your memories and some of the things that y'all enjoyed doing together. Memories are forever!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for being such a kind and understanding person...it's great to hear from you. :)
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading your rhymed poem.
It is well written, has a sound rhyme scheme and flows nicely. The warmth in your words make the poem a delight to read.
Love the photo of you and your mum - it's one to treasure.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading your rhymed poem.
It is well written, has a sound rhyme scheme and flows nicely. The warmth in your words make the poem a delight to read.
Love the photo of you and your mum - it's one to treasure.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review. It's very nice to hear from. You. :)
Comment from Louise Muller
This is a beautiful, sad little poem that makes me miss my mother so intensely. That is the wonder of poetry, I suppose. Congratulations on a wonderful piece. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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This is a beautiful, sad little poem that makes me miss my mother so intensely. That is the wonder of poetry, I suppose. Congratulations on a wonderful piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. It's been 22 years and I still miss mom. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are lovely. The words convey, nature based experiences, closeness, sharing, and kindness. I enjoyed the read
of this poem. It made me think of days with my own Mom, our talks,
and fun together. The poem flows and connects well. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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The author's words are lovely. The words convey, nature based experiences, closeness, sharing, and kindness. I enjoyed the read
of this poem. It made me think of days with my own Mom, our talks,
and fun together. The poem flows and connects well. Great Poem!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Gee
Very nice tribute and remembrance poem of your mother.
I see this is for a contest and hope you do well in the competition.
I enjoyed your poem and thanks for sharing with us.
Gee
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Very nice tribute and remembrance poem of your mother.
I see this is for a contest and hope you do well in the competition.
I enjoyed your poem and thanks for sharing with us.
Gee
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this great review and your encouraging review. :)
Comment from Thatguypk
My first six star rating of the week, for this truly beautiful memory of your mother. The sadness that you mention in the final verse is totally natural and expected, but the overwhelming feeling that emanates from these verses is love. So heart-felt, sincere and very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
PK
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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My first six star rating of the week, for this truly beautiful memory of your mother. The sadness that you mention in the final verse is totally natural and expected, but the overwhelming feeling that emanates from these verses is love. So heart-felt, sincere and very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
PK
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for this exceptional review. My mom and I were very close, I was lucky to have had her.... Thanks again for your kind words. :)