Verse and Story for 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Insurrection"poems, stories
10 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Your meaningful poem is well written and presented in a logical format. Your patriotic point of view was insightful and well-written. Great job, Dove.
Melissa
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Your meaningful poem is well written and presented in a logical format. Your patriotic point of view was insightful and well-written. Great job, Dove.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Hi Melissa, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation,Dove.
-Thank you for this poem and the viewpoint.
-It was a terrible day, a blot on our history and democracy.
-You wrote a very good poem about it.
-The images are very good, along with the rhyme
as you show the many negative consequences of
these horrible actions against democracy.
-The two closing couplets are excellent.
-Good luck in the contest; a very good entry.
-The extra star is for your poem and also
a symbol of democracy and doing the right thing.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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-Very nice image and presentation,Dove.
-Thank you for this poem and the viewpoint.
-It was a terrible day, a blot on our history and democracy.
-You wrote a very good poem about it.
-The images are very good, along with the rhyme
as you show the many negative consequences of
these horrible actions against democracy.
-The two closing couplets are excellent.
-Good luck in the contest; a very good entry.
-The extra star is for your poem and also
a symbol of democracy and doing the right thing.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Dear Pam, thank you very much for your comments, review and "exceptional" rating! Dove
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Dove!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
YES, in what is presumed to be one of the most civilized nations in the world, this vicious rebellion took place. Over 700 have been arrested; I don't know how many are in jail. Your poem is well-written and powerfully worded.
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YES, in what is presumed to be one of the most civilized nations in the world, this vicious rebellion took place. Over 700 have been arrested; I don't know how many are in jail. Your poem is well-written and powerfully worded.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Dear Janice, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Don't feel embarrassed for your country Donna, all countries have their problems and rebels. Your poem is positive for the future, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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Don't feel embarrassed for your country Donna, all countries have their problems and rebels. Your poem is positive for the future, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Donna xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your poem on the anniversary of that disastrous day on many levels, Dove. I like the color scheme, the end rhymes, the great image, and the message. It will be interesting to see with future elections and more of the news articles about this day.
Respectfully, Jan
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You did a great job with your poem on the anniversary of that disastrous day on many levels, Dove. I like the color scheme, the end rhymes, the great image, and the message. It will be interesting to see with future elections and more of the news articles about this day.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
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Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Malerie
I'm sure that day is something most of us would rather not remember, I still can't believe it even though I witnessed it with my own eyes. Your piece is written well and I too hope/pray for truth and honesty.
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I'm sure that day is something most of us would rather not remember, I still can't believe it even though I witnessed it with my own eyes. Your piece is written well and I too hope/pray for truth and honesty.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
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Dear Malerie, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from moongirlwriter
I am hoping the same. . .unfortunately, we have the same president which means we have no president, only a figure head puppet who is doing the bidding of other people. I think about the people who crashed the White House and a part of me says. . .oh my, terrible. The other part of me sees the White House as being every American's house and they have every right to enter it. . .and make their anger be known when our rights are being challenged, our democracy is being challenged and those who should be protecting it. . .sit in the wings and watch it happen. THEN, one more time put the blame on the sitting president who was elected BY THE PEOPLE. I'm left with little hope for the people in our country who are crying out for freedom. Best of luck with this piece. It resonates with the emotions of our country.
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I am hoping the same. . .unfortunately, we have the same president which means we have no president, only a figure head puppet who is doing the bidding of other people. I think about the people who crashed the White House and a part of me says. . .oh my, terrible. The other part of me sees the White House as being every American's house and they have every right to enter it. . .and make their anger be known when our rights are being challenged, our democracy is being challenged and those who should be protecting it. . .sit in the wings and watch it happen. THEN, one more time put the blame on the sitting president who was elected BY THE PEOPLE. I'm left with little hope for the people in our country who are crying out for freedom. Best of luck with this piece. It resonates with the emotions of our country.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Dear moongirlwriter, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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Comment from Eternal Muse
Yes. That January 6 last year was a black spot on our country's history. Let's hope this new year brings new positive developments, ends Covid with it's variants,so we can breathe again
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Yes. That January 6 last year was a black spot on our country's history. Let's hope this new year brings new positive developments, ends Covid with it's variants,so we can breathe again
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Dear Eternal Muse, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A well-crafted poem that directly addresses the shame of the insurrection related to the last election. You have tackled head-on a politically important issue!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A well-crafted poem that directly addresses the shame of the insurrection related to the last election. You have tackled head-on a politically important issue!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
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Dear Theodore, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Christina D. Hissong
I liked this poem, its commentary on what occurred is realistic and true. It really has a lot of merit and thought went into expressing these viewpoints.
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I liked this poem, its commentary on what occurred is realistic and true. It really has a lot of merit and thought went into expressing these viewpoints.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Dear Christina, thank you for your comments and review. Dove