A child at play
to the wonder of being safe2 total reviews
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent story my friend and I love the imagery and the characters interact nicely together and the storyline is interesting and held my attention throughout the piece!
Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Excellent story my friend and I love the imagery and the characters interact nicely together and the storyline is interesting and held my attention throughout the piece!
Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thanks Melodie Michelle~ for this impressive and solid response was appreciated.
Johnny
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Thanks Melodie Michelle~ for this impressive and solid response was appreciated.
Johnny
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Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
I think the first line is great, it opens up so many questions and feels like your thrown into a situation. It makes me want to know what has gone on and I think the story that follows is told well in the short space it has.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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I think the first line is great, it opens up so many questions and feels like your thrown into a situation. It makes me want to know what has gone on and I think the story that follows is told well in the short space it has.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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The Boy Whodunnit~ 'like a jump into a cold river'... thanks for sharing.
Johnny
