From Ireland
Ancestral Discovery contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading your story. You have such a wonderful way with words and are quite adept at expressing yourself. I found this writing to be very interesting. It held my attention throughout. Your vivid descriptions made it easy for me to visualize the scenario you were writing about. Your story really kept me in suspense. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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I really enjoyed reading your story. You have such a wonderful way with words and are quite adept at expressing yourself. I found this writing to be very interesting. It held my attention throughout. Your vivid descriptions made it easy for me to visualize the scenario you were writing about. Your story really kept me in suspense. Excellent job!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Hey, writer723. Thank you so much for checking out my portfolio. Not many people do that anymore. I really appreciate the stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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Ron
Comment from chatterbox1
Careful what you ask for. Curious how curiosity can bite you in the butt...
I could go on, but I think you've been pun-ished enough. Love the surprise ending.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
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Careful what you ask for. Curious how curiosity can bite you in the butt...
I could go on, but I think you've been pun-ished enough. Love the surprise ending.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the hilarious review, Chatterbox. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Ron
Comment from Malerie
This certainly gave me a chuckle. As I read your story it kept me guessing what would happen next. Well put together and keeps the reader interested. The ending was hilarious, so that's who brings the pit of gold at the end of the rainbow, for sure can't miss him.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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This certainly gave me a chuckle. As I read your story it kept me guessing what would happen next. Well put together and keeps the reader interested. The ending was hilarious, so that's who brings the pit of gold at the end of the rainbow, for sure can't miss him.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Malerie. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a laugh at this silliness.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
YAY! I have read a couple of these entries to date and yours is the first one that follows the rules AND seems to have a nice firm storyline. Great job! I wish you good luck in the voting~
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
YAY! I have read a couple of these entries to date and yours is the first one that follows the rules AND seems to have a nice firm storyline. Great job! I wish you good luck in the voting~
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Robyn. I really appreciate the stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece.