Spectacular
Tyburn entry7 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with a complicated style, Mystery Author.
Your image plus words pair perfectly. Your rhymes and syllables
are correct per line.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
You did a great job with a complicated style, Mystery Author.
Your image plus words pair perfectly. Your rhymes and syllables
are correct per line.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Spectacular ', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
' Spectacular ', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
Comment from victor 66
This is pretty much my feeling about the northern part of Minnesota, called the boundary water canoe area, or the BWCA. There are thousands of lakes and millions of trees. I consider this my home. Best wishes.
This is pretty much my feeling about the northern part of Minnesota, called the boundary water canoe area, or the BWCA. There are thousands of lakes and millions of trees. I consider this my home. Best wishes.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
Comment from royowen
This is a nicely written tyburn poem. They are rather unique in their application, quirky and different in their presentation, but still a challenge, like all "form" poems. Well done an excellent post, good luck, blessings Roy
This is a nicely written tyburn poem. They are rather unique in their application, quirky and different in their presentation, but still a challenge, like all "form" poems. Well done an excellent post, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
Comment from RodG
Not much can match a hike in the Rockies during the summer. The views are indeed spectacular. I am not sure "stowing" is the word you want when describing blues.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
Not much can match a hike in the Rockies during the summer. The views are indeed spectacular. I am not sure "stowing" is the word you want when describing blues.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks for your review. I was working on the way some people stow their concerns, not talking about them until they explode.
Comment from Sally Law
This is a beautifully penned and illustrated tyburn poem for the pop up contest, mystery poet. I wish you every success with this difficult form. Rooting for you!
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
This is a beautifully penned and illustrated tyburn poem for the pop up contest, mystery poet. I wish you every success with this difficult form. Rooting for you!
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks for the very positive review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A very nice response to the writing prompt and it creates a great image of the Rocky Mountains. The insert of the word stowing is a nice touch. Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
A very nice response to the writing prompt and it creates a great image of the Rocky Mountains. The insert of the word stowing is a nice touch. Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks very much for your review.