"Heart Spoken Moments"
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "The Destination? (A)"Fine poetry and stories from the Heart
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Comment from Tina Crute
I liked this so much, I showed my husband. He said it sounded really interesting. He liked the style of your writing. It's in pieces, scattered, pointed and reverent too. That's how passion is...all encompassing, trying to make others understand what you are passionate about. Well done:) There is no better subject to write about:)
Tina
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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I liked this so much, I showed my husband. He said it sounded really interesting. He liked the style of your writing. It's in pieces, scattered, pointed and reverent too. That's how passion is...all encompassing, trying to make others understand what you are passionate about. Well done:) There is no better subject to write about:)
Tina
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks Tina.
Many years ago after the loss of my son then filed 8 months later with the suicide of my wife Carolyn.
For two and a half years each morning I woke up?
I cursed Jesus the Christ!
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
Comment from Taminang Therese N
I Love talking about the life of Jesus Christ, especially his role as a wonder teacher who taught with authority as you write,
"teacher with clCompassion who touched All.
With His Own Special Fashion"
I think the keyboard added something on this word "clCompassion" Thanks for writing and sharing about the life and death of our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. Success
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I Love talking about the life of Jesus Christ, especially his role as a wonder teacher who taught with authority as you write,
"teacher with clCompassion who touched All.
With His Own Special Fashion"
I think the keyboard added something on this word "clCompassion" Thanks for writing and sharing about the life and death of our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. Success
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I thank you my dear for stopping by and giving me your thoughts on my piece.
Yes, which of course were wonderful?
And, yes, there was a small grammar error which is corrected now.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Nevermind, l do make a lot of them.
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Never mind, I do several of them myself.
Comment from Annette R.
The picture is certainly very suitable to the poem. The yellow lettering on black is easy to read and probably the best two colors. It is always hard to bring Christ crucified to mind however the poem does speak of crisis and victory.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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The picture is certainly very suitable to the poem. The yellow lettering on black is easy to read and probably the best two colors. It is always hard to bring Christ crucified to mind however the poem does speak of crisis and victory.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Why thank you very much Annette for taking your time to read both of these and to comment.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
Comment from Modee
Good morning, Doctor Ricky. This was a very interesting piece of writing. It has a lot of passion in it. Thanks for this one this morning. It also now has be singing 'Away in a manger' which is a plus. :)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Good morning, Doctor Ricky. This was a very interesting piece of writing. It has a lot of passion in it. Thanks for this one this morning. It also now has be singing 'Away in a manger' which is a plus. :)
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I've always loved the manger song as a child.
And I also enjoy very much writing about Christ!
Thanks for your time and for sharing Modee!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from amahra
Wow, you managed to cover quite a lot in these various poems. It was like a combination of poems in one big story of our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. Thank you for using your gift of writing to give praise to our Lord.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Wow, you managed to cover quite a lot in these various poems. It was like a combination of poems in one big story of our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. Thank you for using your gift of writing to give praise to our Lord.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Why when I comes to being blessed and abilities to be gifted and various different ways?
Yes, He truly has given to me so much more than I get back!
Thanks for reviewing and sharing!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Yes, when Jesus was just a baby, Mary received the prophecy, "And a sword shall pierce your own soul, also."
How could it not? To watch her own son die like that, had to be so horribly painful. And yet, He arose from that grave, three days later, the stone rolled away!
"God was in Christ, reconciling the world to Himself," indeed. It hurt God the Father, to see His Son so badly used. And yet it pleased the Father "to make His soul an offering for sin," for our sakes.
That's a very powerful work of art, very realistic -- but so hard to imagine, being on the other end of the arm, with the hand being nailed to the wood -- such a cruel instrument of death -- such terrible agony.
As a recently created song says so beautifully, "Praise forever to the King of Kings!"
Thank you for this heartfelt poem, Doc Ricky.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Yes, when Jesus was just a baby, Mary received the prophecy, "And a sword shall pierce your own soul, also."
How could it not? To watch her own son die like that, had to be so horribly painful. And yet, He arose from that grave, three days later, the stone rolled away!
"God was in Christ, reconciling the world to Himself," indeed. It hurt God the Father, to see His Son so badly used. And yet it pleased the Father "to make His soul an offering for sin," for our sakes.
That's a very powerful work of art, very realistic -- but so hard to imagine, being on the other end of the arm, with the hand being nailed to the wood -- such a cruel instrument of death -- such terrible agony.
As a recently created song says so beautifully, "Praise forever to the King of Kings!"
Thank you for this heartfelt poem, Doc Ricky.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I'm always happy and pleased to see you Mary.
You have such wonderful insight especially when it comes to spirituality.
Thanks again!
Doctor Ricky 1024