Shame
Homour 5.7.59 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, Shame, has the proper formatting and finds the family bone-burier ironically wrapped in bones himself. The owners will one day pay a terrible price.
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This humorous 5-7-5, Shame, has the proper formatting and finds the family bone-burier ironically wrapped in bones himself. The owners will one day pay a terrible price.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a cute entry for the humorous contest. It put a smile on my face when I read it and saw the picture. The dog is adorable decked out in his costume of bones. Good luck with the contest/
Patty
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This is a cute entry for the humorous contest. It put a smile on my face when I read it and saw the picture. The dog is adorable decked out in his costume of bones. Good luck with the contest/
Patty
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. It's pretty funny and on point with the contest rules. Good luck in the contest.
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Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. It's pretty funny and on point with the contest rules. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
Comment from Wendy G
I agree with the dog - dogs should not be dressed up, as that is demeaning to them. But your words are very humorous, and it is a good entry. Best wishes in the contest!
Wendy
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I agree with the dog - dogs should not be dressed up, as that is demeaning to them. But your words are very humorous, and it is a good entry. Best wishes in the contest!
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
Comment from moongirlwriter
Poor dog. . .he even looks embarrassed. I think he has retreated to his bed because he doesn't want to be walking around in. . .those bones. Cute three liner. I did smile. . .since I was sympathizing with the dog. . .I just couldn't laugh. :) Well done and good luck in the contest. :)
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Poor dog. . .he even looks embarrassed. I think he has retreated to his bed because he doesn't want to be walking around in. . .those bones. Cute three liner. I did smile. . .since I was sympathizing with the dog. . .I just couldn't laugh. :) Well done and good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
Comment from Modee
Haha. That poor dog in the picture. I don't think any animal likes to be dressed in any costume, but it sure is funny at times. The other dogs in the neighborhood are laughing at him, poor thing. Cute. :)
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Haha. That poor dog in the picture. I don't think any animal likes to be dressed in any costume, but it sure is funny at times. The other dogs in the neighborhood are laughing at him, poor thing. Cute. :)
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
Comment from royowen
I couldn't help giving a giggle of this one, it seems like the perfect piece of artwork
That dear dog, looks like a dachshund, beautifully written and a super entry, good luck, blessings Roy
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I couldn't help giving a giggle of this one, it seems like the perfect piece of artwork
That dear dog, looks like a dachshund, beautifully written and a super entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
Comment from victor 66
Well, in my opinion, if you can get a dog to wear a skeleton costume, you've pulled off quite a trick yourself. This is pretty funny and it's still pretty close behind Halloween to be appropriate. I wish you well in the contest.
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Well, in my opinion, if you can get a dog to wear a skeleton costume, you've pulled off quite a trick yourself. This is pretty funny and it's still pretty close behind Halloween to be appropriate. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
Comment from Pantygynt
And I hope that the dog did show them too. The poor animal looks completely bewildered in his skeletal outfit. Give him a proper bone as a Halloween treat.
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And I hope that the dog did show them too. The poor animal looks completely bewildered in his skeletal outfit. Give him a proper bone as a Halloween treat.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021