Untruthful Elephant
Fear of their leader has forced many to lie.3 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for the read and the encouraging review. Much appreciated.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A sardonic humor. Amusing, but too true to be fully funny.
The poem flows well. The message is clear. The picture works well with the poem. I love the word Irrelephant. It almost puns me to hear it. The word play is good.
Thanks for sharing. A good read.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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A sardonic humor. Amusing, but too true to be fully funny.
The poem flows well. The message is clear. The picture works well with the poem. I love the word Irrelephant. It almost puns me to hear it. The word play is good.
Thanks for sharing. A good read.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your read and careful feedback. Greatly appreciated.
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You are welcome.
Comment from pookietoo
I like the play on words: Irrelephant lies. Good luck in the contest. Nice photo of the elephant. I hope all is well with you. Take care, and smile.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I like the play on words: Irrelephant lies. Good luck in the contest. Nice photo of the elephant. I hope all is well with you. Take care, and smile.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the read and feedback.
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Welcome
