Murder at the Melodrama
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Melodrama Murder, Act2Scene2"Comedy-mystery set at rehearsals for melodrama.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Hmmm, the plot gets thicker. You've really put an interesting twist on this. I'm getting more and more interested in who did it. This is a very good write.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Hmmm, the plot gets thicker. You've really put an interesting twist on this. I'm getting more and more interested in who did it. This is a very good write.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. I'm glad you're finding it interesting. We'll hear Don's story in the next scene. judi
Comment from aryr
Another great picture, judiverse. This is a wonderful continuation script. Lisa and Corrine, well actually Lisa finds something of interest about Madge and Don which Clay then questions Don about. This is truly getting interesting and rather mysterious. Very well done and enjoyed.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Another great picture, judiverse. This is a wonderful continuation script. Lisa and Corrine, well actually Lisa finds something of interest about Madge and Don which Clay then questions Don about. This is truly getting interesting and rather mysterious. Very well done and enjoyed.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Hi, Aryr, and thanks so much for your great review and comments. We'll hear more of Don's story in the next scene. judi
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You are so welcome, judi, it was greatly enjoyed and I will watch out for more about Don.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Complex plot--lots of loose ends to tie together--looking forward to see where this is going. The interactions are nuanced--dialog is excellent-- characters are well-drawn.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Complex plot--lots of loose ends to tie together--looking forward to see where this is going. The interactions are nuanced--dialog is excellent-- characters are well-drawn.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. I'm glad you're liking the dialogue. There's still a lot to be done. judi
Comment from lyenochka
Well, Arlo continues to be the class clown even 22 years later! I guess we will know more about Don and his ties to Bellfield in the next scene. Good sleuthing by Corrine and Lisa!
Suggest to keep names consistent:
LOU enters with GAYLE (GALE)
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Well, Arlo continues to be the class clown even 22 years later! I guess we will know more about Don and his ties to Bellfield in the next scene. Good sleuthing by Corrine and Lisa!
Suggest to keep names consistent:
LOU enters with GAYLE (GALE)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. Yes, Corinne has to stick her nose in. Maybe the sheriff does need an assist. judi
Comment from Judy Lawless
Well, at least we know a few more things about some of the characters. I was surprised that Don admitted to being the FBI agent. Guess that removes him as a suspect, maybe. You're doing a good job of keeping us in suspense, judi. Well done.
One spag: Sheriff, Lisa just happened to be looking (at) the Bellfield yearbook from 22 years ago.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Well, at least we know a few more things about some of the characters. I was surprised that Don admitted to being the FBI agent. Guess that removes him as a suspect, maybe. You're doing a good job of keeping us in suspense, judi. Well done.
One spag: Sheriff, Lisa just happened to be looking (at) the Bellfield yearbook from 22 years ago.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. I knew all along Don had been an FBI agent. More about that in the next scene. judi
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Judy.
At first I thought maybe it was Madge after reading her interaction and the sad story of her daughter. However, as the story goes on it seems like the group is sizing everyone up.
What they will eventually do is assume everyone is a suspect except self, and everybody else has the potential of being the criminal. Unfortunately, when the mob decides to conduct the investigation, that's what happens.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Hello Judy.
At first I thought maybe it was Madge after reading her interaction and the sad story of her daughter. However, as the story goes on it seems like the group is sizing everyone up.
What they will eventually do is assume everyone is a suspect except self, and everybody else has the potential of being the criminal. Unfortunately, when the mob decides to conduct the investigation, that's what happens.
Robert
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. Things do get out of hand as so many are under suspicion. judi
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You're welcome
Comment from BethShelby
This is getting more interesting all the time. At least now we are starting to see some of the reason people may have wanted Harvey dead. You have created a very good mystery and I'm enjoying it.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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This is getting more interesting all the time. At least now we are starting to see some of the reason people may have wanted Harvey dead. You have created a very good mystery and I'm enjoying it.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Hi, Beth, and thanks so much for the review and comments. Several people here have things they're keeping hidden. More about Don in the next scene. judi
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Act 2, Scene 2 of the Script speaks realistically in a dramatic order about melodrama murder goes with more information about Madge and Don; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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This Act 2, Scene 2 of the Script speaks realistically in a dramatic order about melodrama murder goes with more information about Madge and Don; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. It's been slow going but we're finally getting down to figuring out who did it. judi
Comment from royowen
It seems that Madge had a 22 year old daughter who committed suicide, Now there's a good reason and motive for, but of course it's too obvious. Well the motives and the people being named, are either enlightening or confusing the issue, and I'll take the latter, knowing murder/mysteries, but you've got it figured Judy, great writing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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It seems that Madge had a 22 year old daughter who committed suicide, Now there's a good reason and motive for, but of course it's too obvious. Well the motives and the people being named, are either enlightening or confusing the issue, and I'll take the latter, knowing murder/mysteries, but you've got it figured Judy, great writing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your review and comments, and thanks for the encouraging words. People are usually not too eager to come forward in these murder mysteries. Many have something to hide. judi
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You?ll work it, you?re clever Judy
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a melodrama that happened in a theater lobby and a famous playwriter Harvey Patterson died. Madge seems to have motive to kill him.
It is a fun play and can't wait to read the next one.
Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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What a melodrama that happened in a theater lobby and a famous playwriter Harvey Patterson died. Madge seems to have motive to kill him.
It is a fun play and can't wait to read the next one.
Well done.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Hi, Lisa, and thanks for your review and comments. I appreciate you for stopping by. Others are going to have a motive, too, as we'll see. judi
