World of the Dead
Zombies come back in an apocalypse.4 total reviews
Comment from samantha0930
I like what your poem says, but the middle line feels kind of weird because you both end a sentence and start a new sentence in the same line with no indication of it. It might read better like: "is upon us! We are doomed" so it feels less awkward. Also, your description line doesn't quite fit with your poem, because it mentions the zombie apocalypse, but the poem itself is more vague and doesn't directly mention zombies, although you do have the zombie picture.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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I like what your poem says, but the middle line feels kind of weird because you both end a sentence and start a new sentence in the same line with no indication of it. It might read better like: "is upon us! We are doomed" so it feels less awkward. Also, your description line doesn't quite fit with your poem, because it mentions the zombie apocalypse, but the poem itself is more vague and doesn't directly mention zombies, although you do have the zombie picture.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Zombies come back in an apocalypse.
World of the Dead Unknown writer
You did well. I saw the contest about 5-7-5 contest.
I couldn't come with nothing to say. Well you did. I wish you the best in the contest
Gert
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Hello Zombies come back in an apocalypse.
World of the Dead Unknown writer
You did well. I saw the contest about 5-7-5 contest.
I couldn't come with nothing to say. Well you did. I wish you the best in the contest
Gert
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
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You are most welcome
Gert
Comment from Justin Chopin
Great work. This sounds to me like it could be made into a story. Thought your descriptions of zombies walking around " For all of eternity" " dooming" to be their : Breakfast, Lunch, and dinner was very well written.
Good luck with this contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Great work. This sounds to me like it could be made into a story. Thought your descriptions of zombies walking around " For all of eternity" " dooming" to be their : Breakfast, Lunch, and dinner was very well written.
Good luck with this contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Ugh!! This guy is a walking dead nightmare. Love that show, but am squeamish, lol... a great contest entry and I wish you the best of luck!! You did very well with the 5-7-5 requirements!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Ugh!! This guy is a walking dead nightmare. Love that show, but am squeamish, lol... a great contest entry and I wish you the best of luck!! You did very well with the 5-7-5 requirements!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
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You are most welcome!