"The Book of Death"
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Cannibalistic Tendencies!(A)"Is the living really alive and living?
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Comment from SHABAMO
Very well written and definitely creepy. It keeps to your unique style of writing. I look forward to reading the next chapter of this poem! Hope John gets what's coming to him.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Very well written and definitely creepy. It keeps to your unique style of writing. I look forward to reading the next chapter of this poem! Hope John gets what's coming to him.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I may just stretch this out into October?
Thanks.
Ricky
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Oh my, Dr. Ricky - this is scary! It is written well and with beaucoup suspense. I keep hoping Kate will see through his deception, but she doesn't. I have foreboding for the next part...as a writer, I can guess things...but I will be here to read and retch, lol
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Oh my, Dr. Ricky - this is scary! It is written well and with beaucoup suspense. I keep hoping Kate will see through his deception, but she doesn't. I have foreboding for the next part...as a writer, I can guess things...but I will be here to read and retch, lol
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I may just stretch this out to October?
Can you say more than one victim?
Thanks.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Cristine22
Aaa! Horrifying! But also kind of funny. I like the way you pull us into the mind of this psychopath, someone who doesn't think like a normal person. I think flow could use a little work. The rhythm you've got going is awesome! But I think it could be emphasized more, which would really strengthen the reading experience as well as the humor aspect (am I right in assuming it's meant to be a bit humorous?). Also, is Sean, John? And I think you misspelled "forensic." Overall, good job!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Aaa! Horrifying! But also kind of funny. I like the way you pull us into the mind of this psychopath, someone who doesn't think like a normal person. I think flow could use a little work. The rhythm you've got going is awesome! But I think it could be emphasized more, which would really strengthen the reading experience as well as the humor aspect (am I right in assuming it's meant to be a bit humorous?). Also, is Sean, John? And I think you misspelled "forensic." Overall, good job!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Why thank you very much for your thoughts and your review!
And, I hope you hang around for part two?
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from country ranch writer
Oops sounds like the plot begins to thinking.he is so infatuated with her will he do her bodily harm in the chapters?I guess time will tell as things unfold.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Oops sounds like the plot begins to thinking.he is so infatuated with her will he do her bodily harm in the chapters?I guess time will tell as things unfold.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Thanks my friend and I'm going to try and fit this in today.
As for to now?
Yes, I just presented,
"Salt's of the Earth"
It's one of those commentaries you have to figure out who I'm talking about?
Doctor Ricky
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Cool🍃