Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I loved the " Nature unfurls color tapestry," That describes Autumn so well when we can enjoy those bright colors on the trees. Congratulations on your second place finish, Zanya!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks for a great reveiw - just love that sparkling Congrats ! zanya

Comment from Mama Baer

Excellent

Beautiful imagery and carefully selected words! I love that you chose to use the word equinox, and the colors of fall really are like a tapestry. Beautiful entry. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Yes, that is indeed quite a feast nature has spread for the harvest season. The artwork is great, but your word choices are inspired.

Excellent imagery and economy words, and I wish you great luck in the voting booth.

Gloria

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Great reveiw zanya

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

This follows the 5,7,5 format. The subject is well defined. The poem flows well. The picture fits well with the poem.


Thanks for sharing. Good read.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks for review zanya

reply by dellsworthpoet on 06-Dec-2021

You are welcome.