Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 53"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
21 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I think all of your loyal readers have been waiting for Mary and Liz to come together! Can't wait to read their exchange in coming chapters. Mason seemed to have great skill at pulling the wool over Cassidy's eyes...
Love is blind! Sofia, I have no doubt, will follow Mason's direction in an attempt to save Miguel! Jam packed chapter! Bridging right to the next!--Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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I think all of your loyal readers have been waiting for Mary and Liz to come together! Can't wait to read their exchange in coming chapters. Mason seemed to have great skill at pulling the wool over Cassidy's eyes...
Love is blind! Sofia, I have no doubt, will follow Mason's direction in an attempt to save Miguel! Jam packed chapter! Bridging right to the next!--Karenina
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Hey sweetie...Seeing you are reading the story, I will take that as a good sign for today.
Lots of action going on in these final chapters. I can't believe that's its almost over...well, then I have to start from the beginning again and make sure its all okay.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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It's been a great ride.... Stalled as I was, I dove back in and immediately became swept up in the twists and turns of crime and family love and loss and triumph... Can't hardly wait for your next book! (Okay, take a day or two rest....smile)---Karenina
Comment from pookietoo
A wonderful story. I enjoyed reading this story. Keep up with the story writing and sharing with us. Good luck to you and best wishes always. :) :)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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A wonderful story. I enjoyed reading this story. Keep up with the story writing and sharing with us. Good luck to you and best wishes always. :) :)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you for stopping by to read and comment on my story. Your time and words are greatly appreciated.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
I love that Liz and Mary are reuniting. I want to hear that conversation in addition to the one with the Cassidy and the agents. Next chapter maybe? Great job with juggling so many details. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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I love that Liz and Mary are reuniting. I want to hear that conversation in addition to the one with the Cassidy and the agents. Next chapter maybe? Great job with juggling so many details. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all I can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
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No problem. Hope you're doing better. Love and prayers. Carol
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Mason has Sofia, his puppet, on the run; meanwhile Liz is finally reconciling with Mary, her mother. The agents, along with Allie and Emma, are trying to glean some useful information from Cassidy's background, in knowing Mason--I hope they're successful.
Errors and suggestions:
"And I'd like some time to talk with Mary if she wouldn't mind."
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"And I'd like some time to talk with Mary, if she wouldn't mind."
"They all fall, Cassidy. It just takes a little longer with the bigger ones." [who is saying this?]
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Mason has Sofia, his puppet, on the run; meanwhile Liz is finally reconciling with Mary, her mother. The agents, along with Allie and Emma, are trying to glean some useful information from Cassidy's background, in knowing Mason--I hope they're successful.
Errors and suggestions:
"And I'd like some time to talk with Mary if she wouldn't mind."
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"And I'd like some time to talk with Mary, if she wouldn't mind."
"They all fall, Cassidy. It just takes a little longer with the bigger ones." [who is saying this?]
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all I can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
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You're very welcome, my dear friend. No need to apologize. May God bless you richly, deeply and completely, and may He provide for all of your family's most urgent and special needs. May you feel the depth of His love, and may some of your family members, who have not yet made a commitment to Him, finally do so. I send you a big hug and a lot of love!
Blessings, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Umm! Looks like the finale is fast approaching. People are reconciling their difference. Wonder what poor Sofia is going to do with so many after her neck!. It would be interesting to see how you end this. Good luck with a terrific finale!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Umm! Looks like the finale is fast approaching. People are reconciling their difference. Wonder what poor Sofia is going to do with so many after her neck!. It would be interesting to see how you end this. Good luck with a terrific finale!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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She will worry about her son's neck before her own, because she is a mother. It may take her a minute to realize that his life might lie in her hands, but I am certain she will get there.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is coming together so nicely. I'm excited to see how things end but I hate for the story to end. That's how I know that I really have enjoyed a book. Patty
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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This is coming together so nicely. I'm excited to see how things end but I hate for the story to end. That's how I know that I really have enjoyed a book. Patty
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Wow...another awesome review and stars. Thank you so much. We still must rescue Annie, get Mary and her family together, and finish off a few other things. But we are very close to the end.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lancellot
Well, we are getting many pieces put together and lives. Yes, it happens that people seldom see through the haze of loving eyes. But, this shows how many people Mason kept under control through fear, money, influence, every trick in the book.
Good chapter.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Well, we are getting many pieces put together and lives. Yes, it happens that people seldom see through the haze of loving eyes. But, this shows how many people Mason kept under control through fear, money, influence, every trick in the book.
Good chapter.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thanks...Yes, Mason was a very controlling man. I can't imagine letting someone get control of me that way, but I've seen it happen to others. Thanks so much for reviewing, lancelot.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Excruciating! Please post ASAP about the rescue of Annie--how many chapters to go? Well done!
Heads up--your summary section got formatted strangely.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Excruciating! Please post ASAP about the rescue of Annie--how many chapters to go? Well done!
Heads up--your summary section got formatted strangely.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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thanks...it's been doing that lately with the story as well. I have no idea what's going on with it.
I'm not sure how many chapters are left. I have an outline but it depends on how much goes on in one chapter or sometimes my mind takes me in a completely different direction than what I planned. Which is happening this very minute. LOL
Smiles, Carol
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As soon as we conjure them, our characters take over!
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I am glad for Mary and Liz/Hope that they are finally getting to know each other and accept what happened in their lives. It's too bad that Cassidy didn't realize what she was getting into with Mason until so much damage was done.
Question:
What did you mean with the Spanish:
Dios Mio, todos vamos a mortar. (matar=to kill; morir=to die)
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Well, I am glad for Mary and Liz/Hope that they are finally getting to know each other and accept what happened in their lives. It's too bad that Cassidy didn't realize what she was getting into with Mason until so much damage was done.
Question:
What did you mean with the Spanish:
Dios Mio, todos vamos a mortar. (matar=to kill; morir=to die)
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Oh My God we are all going to die.....I think the autocorrect changed it to mortar. I've changed it back.
They say love is blind and in her case it was until it was too late. She's lucky she is alive.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Am glad that Mary and Liz will reconcile - although perhaps in real life it would take a bit more time for them to not mistrust each other.
Will they get to Sofia before she gets away? She will have a lot of incriminating evidence on her!
It's all coming together - everybody has little bits of multiple puzzles. Where is Michael at the moment? And his search for the gold?
Suggestion: No comma after "man" in "You believed the man you thought you were in love with".
Always interesting - you still keep us looking forward to seeing that another chapter is ready! Excellent.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Am glad that Mary and Liz will reconcile - although perhaps in real life it would take a bit more time for them to not mistrust each other.
Will they get to Sofia before she gets away? She will have a lot of incriminating evidence on her!
It's all coming together - everybody has little bits of multiple puzzles. Where is Michael at the moment? And his search for the gold?
Suggestion: No comma after "man" in "You believed the man you thought you were in love with".
Always interesting - you still keep us looking forward to seeing that another chapter is ready! Excellent.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Michael is still in the hospital with a broken leg. I was going to send Poppa there today to talk to him, but I haven't decided whether Cynthia will live or die.... LOL
Thanks for the review. Smiles, Carol