Comment from Shanna Bertrand

Average

This poem definitely evokes emotion as many of the individuals mentioned have impacted many lives, not to mention the very personal turn it takes at the end. Double check spelling and some grammar.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021

Well I actually did edit it.
Twice and I can't see any problems with it still?
I will tell you the content it was amazing and I do believe the gift of life people and Jesus Christ deserve more than an average rating on this one considering the fact that my work comes from above.
Every person that writes on this site and every person that reviews has the right to their own opinions.
I don't chastise anybody's work and I definitely never give less than five stars mostly six stars.
When I do see ours and gramical problems I point them out but I do not take anything away for it.
Why because there's Young writers here there's college age Young writers I review one of her works and she's written a book.
I will not ever ever take a star away because I the person didn't cross the T or Dot the I.
Thanks for your time in review!
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"

Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

Excellent listing and narrative on many that fought for justice, I learned a lot about many people.

I must Strongly disagree that Muhammad Ali belongs on this list as draft evasion issues crime, not to be celebrated.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021

When I googled self-sacrifice I came up with the many people and he was actually first.
On your right he was and did not fight for the United States but he had changed his religion also and his name.
He wasn't looked up to my children and he also was honored to carry the torch in that summer olympics many years ago.
But at that point the brain damage was very visible.
Thanks again for sharing and reviewing!
Doctor Ricky 1024