Ricky Rules
Ricky is the boss.2 total reviews
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A very entertaining story. I found it quite amusing.
Both characters seem a bit cartoon-ish and overblown. The dialogue was believable. The flow was good. There were no obvious bumps.
Thanks for sharing. A good read.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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A very entertaining story. I found it quite amusing.
Both characters seem a bit cartoon-ish and overblown. The dialogue was believable. The flow was good. There were no obvious bumps.
Thanks for sharing. A good read.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Thank you Dells, I'm glad you liked it.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Ricky Rules"
As I was starting to get into this I realized that it's a conversation between you and some idiot!
And no matter how many times he would dip your dog you would double back on him!
With your love for your pet!
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Sic um!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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"Ricky Rules"
As I was starting to get into this I realized that it's a conversation between you and some idiot!
And no matter how many times he would dip your dog you would double back on him!
With your love for your pet!
...
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues
.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Sic um!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Woof!