Patriot
For love of Country.3 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
Yes, I would hope I would say yes to these questions. I agree that our country is in serious trouble. Every day it seems something goes wrong and another shoe drops.Patty
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Yes, I would hope I would say yes to these questions. I agree that our country is in serious trouble. Every day it seems something goes wrong and another shoe drops.Patty
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
Comment from Pam (respa)
-An impressive image
and good presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-You define what a patriot
is very well by giving an
example, and then make
a good point at the end
with your question.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-An impressive image
and good presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-You define what a patriot
is very well by giving an
example, and then make
a good point at the end
with your question.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
That was a nice ode to a Patriot. He looks like a batman (smile). You've packed quite a meaning in these three lines.
This reminded me President Kennedy's famous words:
"Ask not what this country can do for you, ask what you can do for this country."
Great imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. Good luck in the contest.
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That was a nice ode to a Patriot. He looks like a batman (smile). You've packed quite a meaning in these three lines.
This reminded me President Kennedy's famous words:
"Ask not what this country can do for you, ask what you can do for this country."
Great imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
