Shattered Heart
Her love put my heart back together.3 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
Good writing piece my fellow writer! You built an image in the beginning that to me, as the reader, had a suprise ending. Instead of explaining how your heart got shattered you went the other way and described how it was healed. Nice graphic to go with the story! Good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Good writing piece my fellow writer! You built an image in the beginning that to me, as the reader, had a suprise ending. Instead of explaining how your heart got shattered you went the other way and described how it was healed. Nice graphic to go with the story! Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read, review, and for encouraging comment.
Comment from zanya
Ah-h such a sweet and inspiring Septolet telling not of total heartache but of a broken heart lovingly and gently nursed back to emotional health- how nice to encounter an optimistic tone like this !
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Ah-h such a sweet and inspiring Septolet telling not of total heartache but of a broken heart lovingly and gently nursed back to emotional health- how nice to encounter an optimistic tone like this !
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the read and review.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
May want to edit this. Poem is to be 7 lines and you have six. Should be an easy fix, just decide where to place another line break. I would suggest after heart and insert an emdash there.
An interesting poem with simple message. Words seem to flow well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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May want to edit this. Poem is to be 7 lines and you have six. Should be an easy fix, just decide where to place another line break. I would suggest after heart and insert an emdash there.
An interesting poem with simple message. Words seem to flow well. Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thanks for the catch. Appreciate your help.
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You're welcome.
