Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is an extremely moving poem of tangled skeins of love, lust and relationships.
I particularly liked your words
Her tattooed and amazing body was aching...
My eyes were vividly breaking...
As She touched my Soul...:

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021

I thank you Kathleen but what I just presented at 4:30 in the morning will blow the socks off of the Fanstory Universe!
"Seven Laws of Judification"
Thanks for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Doctor Ricky 1024:

As I have said before, I sometimes have difficulty trying to separate the real from the ethereal when I read your work - but then I suspect that is the way it is supposed to be. I am always intrigued by your work.

Rdfrdmom2

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

I started my writing career as a fluke after a 36-year career building a chain of Foodtown supermarkets in New Jersey was ruined.
Sometimes the death of a child will do that to you.
And followed by the death of your spouse.
(Yes, only 8 months later)
Or put a spark or flame within your soul!
...
I did the usual two and a half years grieving thing and then I snapped out of that and stop blaming myself.
I actually experimented with writing earlier only 3 weeks after Jason's death around April 21st 2003.
I wrote a poem on his Dell computer and tears entitled, "Buddy Friend"
It took a while to present cuz I wasn't good with a typing skills but after 3 hours it was accepted by the international Society of poetry.
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I was then told it was extremely beautiful and rare and asked to compete in DC and 2005.
Which I did winning my first trophy.
I repeated that in 2006 in the Riviera Hotel in Las Vegas winning my second.
In 11th grade I thought that English literature was basically a course for potential female poets like Elizabeth Browning.
At that point in my life I had only read two books.
(I wasn't much of a reader and I still aren't!)
"The Wonderful Wizard of Oz"
By L. Frank Baum
And, "Tarzan of the Apes"
By Edgar Rice Burroughs.
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And 17 years of a master collection of over 800 what one of my publisher calls "Masterpieces"
As I continued further I got World recognized by Number Three Covington's Who's Who and Number Two Strathmore's Who's Who.
I basically feel the writings are to a mass of Fortune of course when the publishings are done and also the rights to movies and a TV show.
And, in 2025.
I estimate my net worth to be between,
$3,000,000,000~
$5,000,000,000.
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On April 1st 2003 I told my 18-year-old son Jason.
Who was brain dead in a deep coma raccoon with umbilical fluid coming out of his ears.
That I would get to the bottom of what had going on.
It's horrible and Horrid, stupid tragedy.
I told him I knew he could hear me and that nobody would ever forget him!
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18 years later this past April Fool's Day 2021.
Three out of four human beings walk this planet with my son's Heart, Lungs, and Kidneys.
As far as I know now for the past 10 years they've been off of any kind of medication for rejection.
Two out of the three of communicated with in six letters.
The last two was a little girl during the tragedy who is now a grown woman living in South Jersey has never responded.
But she is my fifth daughter.
And, I say these things in the name of our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ.
Amen.

reply by Rdfrdmom2 on 17-Jul-2021

Ricky: I cannot imagine losing a child much less losing a spouse and a child 8 months apart. You are amazing. Keep writing. We have much to learn from you. Jan

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Look forward to the continuation, everybody deserves some goodness and happiness, the description of your "vision"? was wonderful throughout, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

Thanks kahpot.
The second part is complete and just released.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from AliMom

Excellent

Interesting, dream-like. More solid than your past endeavors. Less expectation on the part of the reader to make the connections. That is good. I like the choice of green on black. I also like your picture choice.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021

This one will be completed later today and again thanks for reviewing.
Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by AliMom on 16-Jul-2021

Doctor Ricky, it is a pleasure