Twisted
A little bit of twisted life.10 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I find your rhymes quite meaningful. There are those that appear "beautiful" and the lies that they tell can cause twists in our lives. Great job in using all these words to share wisdom in such a brief poem!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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I find your rhymes quite meaningful. There are those that appear "beautiful" and the lies that they tell can cause twists in our lives. Great job in using all these words to share wisdom in such a brief poem!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Thank you. I always appreciate your reviews.
Comment from Bonnie Seach
This poem is compliant with contest rules.
It is cleverly formulated
The presentation is attractive.
It is sad but true that where and when there is no trust it mocks love.
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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This poem is compliant with contest rules.
It is cleverly formulated
The presentation is attractive.
It is sad but true that where and when there is no trust it mocks love.
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thanks for your kind review. Sometimes the sadness in life comes out in my writing. I have to watch that at times.
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Comment from pookietoo
A nice rhyming job. Keep up the great work. Hope you do well in this contest. Keep writing your poems. Thank you again. God bless. Keep a smile on your face
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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A nice rhyming job. Keep up the great work. Hope you do well in this contest. Keep writing your poems. Thank you again. God bless. Keep a smile on your face
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thank you for reviewing. God bless and have a good weekend.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
A well written poem - it does sound a bit disillusioned and cynical. Unfortunately that's the experience of many. As you say, the twists and turns of life are like that, and the hope of love is simply an absurd dream. Thoughtfully written. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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A well written poem - it does sound a bit disillusioned and cynical. Unfortunately that's the experience of many. As you say, the twists and turns of life are like that, and the hope of love is simply an absurd dream. Thoughtfully written. Best wishes.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thanks for your kind review. Sometimes the sadness in life comes out in my writing. I have to watch that at times.
Comment from equestrik
This is a well presented entry for the specific word use contest. I really feel that you conveyed your thoughts well and made your feelings known. It is well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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This is a well presented entry for the specific word use contest. I really feel that you conveyed your thoughts well and made your feelings known. It is well done.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thanks for your kind review. I always appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Twisted, has the required words and presents a tone of indifference as the qualities of happiness, beauty, trust, and love are held suspect.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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This poem, Twisted, has the required words and presents a tone of indifference as the qualities of happiness, beauty, trust, and love are held suspect.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
Comment from Supe
This is a lovely smooth flowing little ditty. I see you used all the words so nothing for me to edit. I enjoyed this. Clever picture to complement as well. Good luck in the contest. A great contender.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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This is a lovely smooth flowing little ditty. I see you used all the words so nothing for me to edit. I enjoyed this. Clever picture to complement as well. Good luck in the contest. A great contender.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
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you are welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem is anything but nonsensical. I love the spoken rhythm of it, carried along well with the rhyming.
Love isn't absurd - it's those people who lie that are absurd.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Your poem is anything but nonsensical. I love the spoken rhythm of it, carried along well with the rhyming.
Love isn't absurd - it's those people who lie that are absurd.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, short, but very much to the point. Sometimes life's experiences can be completely out of our hands and chaos seems to happen. It brought to mind the quote. S&#@t happens. Beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Oh yes indeed, short, but very much to the point. Sometimes life's experiences can be completely out of our hands and chaos seems to happen. It brought to mind the quote. S&#@t happens. Beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Thank you so very much for your kind review Roy.
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Welcome
Comment from Raul1
I like your poem. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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I like your poem. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
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You're welcome!
