Enraged Jealousy
Jealousy contest entry.3 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
A good psychological study on jealousy. You brought out well the unhealthy nature of this emotion. You are right - a person obsessed with jealousy cannot stand anyone better than him - jealously blinds his/her mind.
Excellent imagery, visuals and presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
A good psychological study on jealousy. You brought out well the unhealthy nature of this emotion. You are right - a person obsessed with jealousy cannot stand anyone better than him - jealously blinds his/her mind.
Excellent imagery, visuals and presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank you!
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welcome
Comment from kahpot
Yes jealousy does stem from the accomplishments of others and the wish for more attention on themselves, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
Yes jealousy does stem from the accomplishments of others and the wish for more attention on themselves, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I would not like to meet this person. This is very well crafted contest entry.
Note:
He may have common sense, but strong emotions can overwhelm that in people.
A man who fights
to be best than her,
- I would recommend rewriting this part
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
Hmm, I would not like to meet this person. This is very well crafted contest entry.
Note:
He may have common sense, but strong emotions can overwhelm that in people.
A man who fights
to be best than her,
- I would recommend rewriting this part
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank you!