Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet, I gave your 8th vote!


I thing there is nothing more resorting than being in contact with nature.. I love walking in my woods

I read your notes ...I also love to cloud gaze .. I love the white ones but the dark ones define me better ..I 'm gloomy by nature .

 Comment Written 30-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Thanks for the insightful review. I try to kayak on the lake every morning, my religion haha.

Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

A clever 15 syllable poem that is well composed and presented.

The concept of being tethered by gravity is an interesting one.

Thank for sharing your work.

Nicely done.

 Comment Written 28-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Thanks for the thoughtful review. Tethered by sweet grass haha

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

To drift away like a balloon up up and away in the sky....but life, or in this case, gravity prevents us from doing so...keeping our feet on the ground. Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 28-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Thanks for the review Carol, cheers.