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Viewing comments for Chapter 120 "Whatcha Gonna Get"
Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from blondie560
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Oh how I remember those days! Besides Chuck E. Cheese's we also had a western themed pizza restaurant. My son went to a few birthday partys and had one himself there. I laughed when you said you got two starlight mints! Candy was the best deal to use your tickets on. When I was cleaning out stuff my kids left behind when they moved out, I found my son's stash of tickets and tokens that he had never gone back to use! He didn't want them, so they were tossed out, but the memories of all the fun was still there.

 Comment Written 24-May-2021


reply by the author on 24-May-2021
    ME TOO! I liked the Tootsie rolls. They even had vanilla and fruit-flavored ones. Thanks for the review, blondie560. If no one on the Buy Nothing group claims these, I may throw them out too. :(
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 3-6-9 suite, Whatcha Gonna Get?, has the proper formatting and relates a successful and enjoyable day at Chucky Cheese playing games and buying timeless treasures.

 Comment Written 23-May-2021


reply by the author on 24-May-2021
    Heh! Thanks, Bill. Do you want some tickets?
Comment from lyenochka
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Are there any Chuck E Cheese restaurants open these days? I agree that it's the expense of the prizes but the memories that counts the most.
By the way, you'll need to add two more stanzas for the contest!

 Comment Written 23-May-2021


reply by the author on 23-May-2021
    LOL! So I do! Thanks, lyenochka.
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
    Fixed! Or so I hope! LOL!
reply by lyenochka on 23-May-2021
    Good fix - and so FAST, too! Best wishes in the contest!