Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Haiku (bored cub) "National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event
6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Your modern haiku feels more like a tanka. I like how the middle line of "let's talk" changes everything from the initial state of boredom to loving listening and interest!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Your modern haiku feels more like a tanka. I like how the middle line of "let's talk" changes everything from the initial state of boredom to loving listening and interest!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Thank you :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a cutie the cub is now, but in a few months--watch out. I enjoyed your haiku, Alicia. You did a great job. I have not seen one done like this. Thanks for the notes. Your words are descriptive and well chosen. They paint a great picture of this interesting cub.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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What a cutie the cub is now, but in a few months--watch out. I enjoyed your haiku, Alicia. You did a great job. I have not seen one done like this. Thanks for the notes. Your words are descriptive and well chosen. They paint a great picture of this interesting cub.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 27-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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You're the best. Thank you :)
Comment from AnnaLinda
Sunni,
This is a really cute and interesting 'haiku' you have written - I like the idea of a bored club - depending on exactly what one is bored of, of course. Entertaining use of 20 syllables.
That's a really cute presentation as well.
My ears are ready!
AnnaLinda
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Sunni,
This is a really cute and interesting 'haiku' you have written - I like the idea of a bored club - depending on exactly what one is bored of, of course. Entertaining use of 20 syllables.
That's a really cute presentation as well.
My ears are ready!
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 27-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Have a great week :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-syllable poem, Bored Cub, has the required syllable count and finds the ferocious yet fairly docile feline waiting to hear or see the very next thing. Hope it is entertaining.
Note: the title reads *club*.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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This twenty-syllable poem, Bored Cub, has the required syllable count and finds the ferocious yet fairly docile feline waiting to hear or see the very next thing. Hope it is entertaining.
Note: the title reads *club*.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
This is a very cool post Alicia, it is a pleasure see an expert in creative presentation, someone as artistic as you are a greatly versatile, well done my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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This is a very cool post Alicia, it is a pleasure see an expert in creative presentation, someone as artistic as you are a greatly versatile, well done my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you :)
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Welcome
Comment from kahpot
I must ask-your title Haiku (bored club) is this meant to be (cub) what gorgeous artwork you have chosen for this excellent poem, love the last line, those ears really do look like they are ready****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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I must ask-your title Haiku (bored club) is this meant to be (cub) what gorgeous artwork you have chosen for this excellent poem, love the last line, those ears really do look like they are ready****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thanks for the edit note. Thank you :)