Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Because of my illness, I eat fudge bars or fudgecicles and little else...I have enjoyed my share of burgers. This is a delightful presentation and brought a smile to my old face. You are a writer of delightful bits and if we call it chick-lit...all the more power to you.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021

Thank you so much, Sherry, hope you're well today :)
Best wishes, Debra

reply by Sherry Asbury on 19-Apr-2021

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Literature
by Debra White


Hello, Debra,

Cute poem about delicious hamburgers. It's not fancy or healthy but once in a while is fine....in my opinion. ;) I love the presentation. You are doing well with the NaPoWriMo challenge. Keep it up.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021

Thank you so much, Gypsy :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

This strikes a few chords! Clever dual play on literal food (non-pretentious vs gourmet) and mental nourishment (pop lit vs classics)--I am hopelessly low-brow in both, as well as in music. Well said!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021

LOL! Glad you enjoyed this, Liz :) I'm also happy that you noticed the dual play - I think some folk didn't get it....
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Amen! I could never be a vegan or a vegetarian. It's a burger once and awhile or a good steak. Add fries and I'm in heaven. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021

Thanks so much, Sal :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That is one humongous burger. These days as I age, that just doesn't appeal to me anymore. Maybe I don't need as much protein and iron as in my youth. And I like your analogy to "fine dining" and classical literature. We read things that we know are good for our brains but we also enjoy some satisfying entertaining reads as well.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Helen :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I agree, You can't beat a great burger. I like the image you chose for your well thought out words, Debra. I like the offsetting two lines--they read well together to make a great statement.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021

Thank you so much, Jan :) I appreciate your lovely feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I agree with you. I "fine dine" on classic literature (especially poetry) on occasion, but dig my teeth into "juicy" thrillers every day. They definitely "hit the spot."
Rod

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021

Thanks so much, Rod, for your great feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra