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Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021

Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Tonight's Moon"
National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event

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Comment from tfawcus
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There is something special about the thin sliver of a crescent moon. Much more romantic to my mind than the full moon. I hope the skies clear for you soon!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Thank you
    Have a nice week. God bless you :)
Comment from royowen
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You've been cooking with gas, and baking your poems beautifully and I'm proud of you, you're putting in those "hard" yards, and brilliant is your mantle, well done Alicia, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Hi Roy! Thank you. Have a great week. Peace be upon you :)
reply by royowen on 19-Apr-2021
    You too Alicia
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your image of the moon is beautiful. I have seen this phase, and it is at times difficult to see. From your well thought out poem, I would guess that after expressing dismay about not seeing the moon, you finally did get to view it. At that time, you offered an apology to God.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Hi Jan! I didn't view the moon. God punished me. But poetry is art and art is subjective. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious) :)
Comment from lyenochka
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I heard it was pretty two nights ago. I didn't see it. You need to the right angle at the right time of night and to be out then. Lol. We'll enjoy your moon picture instead! Thanks for the info!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Hi! Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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The moon seems so elusive as its activity changes it's shape and encourages it to dart about, but when we see it, we always appreciate the view, I enjoyed your write Alicia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Hi Dolly! And thankfully it repeats itself on a monthly cycle. So, there's always next month. Hahahahaha.

    Thank you. God bless you :)