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Comment from
Chris Fruge
This was a really neat piece. The rhyming made it fun, yet there was the serious undertone of someone not dealing with their issues by drinking too much.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
Dear Chris, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
reply by Chris Fruge on 17-Apr-2021
Comment from
Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your monorhyme poem, Dove. Your lines read well with a sad, but often true, story to tell. I like the image and the color scheme.
Best wishes for the rest of the month of poems.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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