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na-po-wri-mo contest

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Comment from Chris Fruge
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This was a really neat piece. The rhyming made it fun, yet there was the serious undertone of someone not dealing with their issues by drinking too much.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    Dear Chris, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
reply by Chris Fruge on 17-Apr-2021
    You?re welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your monorhyme poem, Dove. Your lines read well with a sad, but often true, story to tell. I like the image and the color scheme.
Best wishes for the rest of the month of poems.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove