Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Junk Bowl"National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event
6 total reviews
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
So absolutely adorable. I love your classy style, shuffle and twitches!! Fun!! You did an awesome job! Love the illustration too! Clever idea abd so heartwarming!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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So absolutely adorable. I love your classy style, shuffle and twitches!! Fun!! You did an awesome job! Love the illustration too! Clever idea abd so heartwarming!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
"Be still my junk." Love it. I thought this was a creative poem. Love the way you use words. The message was a straightforward one that you did such a great job in conveying. Great job.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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"Be still my junk." Love it. I thought this was a creative poem. Love the way you use words. The message was a straightforward one that you did such a great job in conveying. Great job.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you :)
Comment from Rubypond
I have a salad drawer! Lol! I like the reference to stirring salad. I think I could feel a little rhythm to this too as in a tune. Perhaps just smooth out a little. It's a personal preference mind you. I sometimes use punctuation and sometimes do not. It may also be that I am on an iPhone with limited formatting ability and it's giving me a rough look at the way you laid it out. If so then that's not an issue. Overall it was quite an enjoyable read!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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I have a salad drawer! Lol! I like the reference to stirring salad. I think I could feel a little rhythm to this too as in a tune. Perhaps just smooth out a little. It's a personal preference mind you. I sometimes use punctuation and sometimes do not. It may also be that I am on an iPhone with limited formatting ability and it's giving me a rough look at the way you laid it out. If so then that's not an issue. Overall it was quite an enjoyable read!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Hi! You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from robyn corum
Sunny girl,
What a fun poem. I may have to take a lead from this prompt and write about my own junk drawer - what a fun topic. Q: must we write of only one or can we write of them ALLLLLLLL????? hahahaha
I did enjoy this fun piece. I think you are whimsical and joyful. We need more of that. Thanks!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Sunny girl,
What a fun poem. I may have to take a lead from this prompt and write about my own junk drawer - what a fun topic. Q: must we write of only one or can we write of them ALLLLLLLL????? hahahaha
I did enjoy this fun piece. I think you are whimsical and joyful. We need more of that. Thanks!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you
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Comment from royowen
I can't help but like this quirky and Alicia driven work, you are never afraid of speaking your hear heart and the unique look at the world, and I love that aspect of you and others, well done, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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I can't help but like this quirky and Alicia driven work, you are never afraid of speaking your hear heart and the unique look at the world, and I love that aspect of you and others, well done, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you :)
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A pleasure
Comment from lyenochka
How cute - you have a "junk bowl" instead of a "junk drawer" which holds too much junk. I think you met this challenge very well. I liked your refrain of "Be still my junk!"
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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How cute - you have a "junk bowl" instead of a "junk drawer" which holds too much junk. I think you met this challenge very well. I liked your refrain of "Be still my junk!"
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you :)