NaPoWriMo 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "5. Love"NaPoWriMo 2021 Poetry Challenge
11 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
I love pies, except the steak and kidney or any other wierd organ, pie. lol Favorite is strawberry and rhubarb pie. luv it. Damn I feel the need.
lulube
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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I love pies, except the steak and kidney or any other wierd organ, pie. lol Favorite is strawberry and rhubarb pie. luv it. Damn I feel the need.
lulube
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Me too Lulube, I don't like offal at all!
Thanks for the feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
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welcome, stick to the refreshing pies!!!
lulube
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I bet that turkey pie tasted wonderful! Yes, our mums made lots of yummy pies and cakes just because... And we all loved her for them. Those were such lovely times, but too long ago now. How I wish we could go back for a while, like a time-travel holiday. Another excellent poem, Debra. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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I bet that turkey pie tasted wonderful! Yes, our mums made lots of yummy pies and cakes just because... And we all loved her for them. Those were such lovely times, but too long ago now. How I wish we could go back for a while, like a time-travel holiday. Another excellent poem, Debra. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Hello Sandra :)
I miss my mum's cooking too. It's been too long...
Thanks for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra xx
Comment from Gloria ....
Well a mother cooking up delicious food for her children, is definitely a sign of love, and those home made pies are delicious.
I really enjoy your entire presentation, here, Debra.
Excellent entry into your NaPo book. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Well a mother cooking up delicious food for her children, is definitely a sign of love, and those home made pies are delicious.
I really enjoy your entire presentation, here, Debra.
Excellent entry into your NaPo book. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Hi Gloria, thank you for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Sharon Davis
Love is often shown in the simple actions of one who cares. Homemade pie made by one who loves us, speaks volumes. Great descriptive imagery. Great presentation. Lovely image
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Love is often shown in the simple actions of one who cares. Homemade pie made by one who loves us, speaks volumes. Great descriptive imagery. Great presentation. Lovely image
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Sharon, for your lovely feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Love
by Debra White
The relation between cooking, food, and love is strong, this the old saying...comfort food. Specially when mom does the baking just because :) well done my friend.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Love
by Debra White
The relation between cooking, food, and love is strong, this the old saying...comfort food. Specially when mom does the baking just because :) well done my friend.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Gypsy :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
Lovely! I agree. Any time mom cooks, it's because she loves the family - well, unless she laces the food with arsenic. But that's a whole different story, right? hahahahaha Never mind. This was fun!
It's you I'm sending my kid stuff to, right?
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Debra,
Lovely! I agree. Any time mom cooks, it's because she loves the family - well, unless she laces the food with arsenic. But that's a whole different story, right? hahahahaha Never mind. This was fun!
It's you I'm sending my kid stuff to, right?
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Hello Robyn,
Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate it :)
Yes, it was me you were sending the 'kid stuff' to!
Best wishes, Debra
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Okay - just have faith.
Comment from Sally Law
Wow! This looks scrumptious! I love Chicken Pot Pie! That's what we call meat pies here in the states. I like Shepherds Pie, too. What a lovely and loving Mum you are! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Wow! This looks scrumptious! I love Chicken Pot Pie! That's what we call meat pies here in the states. I like Shepherds Pie, too. What a lovely and loving Mum you are! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Sal, for your lovely feedback :) Mmmm, shepherd's pie!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, this is. Loving pie in more ways than one Debra. What an inventive write! The oozing gravy and pie crust tarnishing with gold! Wow, what a precious meal this is, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Oh my goodness, this is. Loving pie in more ways than one Debra. What an inventive write! The oozing gravy and pie crust tarnishing with gold! Wow, what a precious meal this is, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Dolly, for your kind and encouraging feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Your poem takes me back about fifty years to the days of home-made pies, both savoury and sweet ones (sometimes even in the same meal if we were really needy. Those meals were sheer bliss.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Your poem takes me back about fifty years to the days of home-made pies, both savoury and sweet ones (sometimes even in the same meal if we were really needy. Those meals were sheer bliss.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your feedback, Katherine :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your pie looks great. I imagine it was delicious, too. Your free verse reads well, Debra. I like the way you cook with love as an ingredient.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Your pie looks great. I imagine it was delicious, too. Your free verse reads well, Debra. I like the way you cook with love as an ingredient.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Jan :)
Best wishes, Debra