Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Happy Birthday, dear Debra!! I'm glad you had a wonderful day. I'm behind, so I'm glad it was wonderful and that you were blessed with sunshine, food and love. Blessings always,
Sal XOs. ..

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021

Thank you so much, Sal :)
Best wishes, Debra x

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Art
by Debra White


Excellent Joseph star poem about art...one of my favorite things in life. It's an interesting poetic form...I never tried it. Art straight from the heart is the best kind.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021

Thank you, Gypsy, for your lovely feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I missed this one, Debra. A belated Happy Birthday, my friend. I'm glad you had a nice day. Your Joseph's Star poem, is lovely. It describes poetry perfectly. Well done, my friend. Another day done! :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021

Thank you so much, Sandra :)
Love, Debra x

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your club challenge poem, Debra. The picture plus your well-chosen words pair nicely. Great job with the syllable count per line, and the first and last line's rhymes are super. You give readers much to think about when they think of art.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021

Thank you, Jan, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a nicely written poem for Joseph's star. Glad you had a good day and Happy Birthday. Nicely done. Awesome photo selection to compliment your poem.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021

Thank you so much, Joanne :) Best wishes, Debra

reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 06-Apr-2021

Your welcome

Comment from Cogitator

Excellent

ART comprises the first three letters of artificial - meaning man-made. All human structures are expressions of human visualization. Ghettos are products of a sick societal mind that communicates its indifference. Good effort....John

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thank you, John.
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Happy Birthday, Debra.
-It sounds like a very special one.
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-A good topic with effective imagery
that describes art very well.
-It does come from the heart.
-Enjoy the rest of your day!!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Hello Pam :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback and birthday wishes!
Kind regards, Debra

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Apr-2021

You are very welcome, Debra.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Striking presentation! Art/heart surrounding the "meat" of the poem make for a perfect sandwich. Happy 28th birthday. I love Indian food too--it's been a while!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thanks Liz, I can live with being 28! I've got Indian takeaway leftovers for lunch today, can't wait!
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Well Happy Birthday to you, Debra. So glad you were able to share your joy with us, in the form of a Joseph's Star. We all write straight from the heart, and you have stated that poetically.

I can't wait to read your poem about your meal, because that sounds delicious to me. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Gloria, it was SO delicious! The theme of today's poem is 'Love' - perhaps I'll dedicate it to my chicken makhani!
Thank you for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a fine write for a Joseph's star and not one word was wasted here, these are not easy to write because of their construction, but you nailed it here Debra, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thank you so much, Dolly :) I appreciate your kind and encouraging feedback. Best wishes, Debra