spring whispers
a haiku2 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
You describe a lovely spring day with the warm breeze and blooming trees. Good use of alliteration. I was told to avoid rhyming in haiku but I'm sure the committee will have the final say. Have a lovely spring day there!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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You describe a lovely spring day with the warm breeze and blooming trees. Good use of alliteration. I was told to avoid rhyming in haiku but I'm sure the committee will have the final say. Have a lovely spring day there!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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rebel haha. Thanks for the review and have a great weekend. Think spring.
Comment from Earl Corp
I like how you were able to make the last two lines of your haiku rhyme, not many people do that. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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I like how you were able to make the last two lines of your haiku rhyme, not many people do that. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the review, have a great weekend, cheers, j