Blinded By Darkness
Depression causes inability to see light that is all around16 total reviews
Comment from Patty Cicero
"Moonbeams
Illuminate
Redemptive hands reaching
Toward blinded souls who can't find
The sun."
*well done. A short but moving piece on depression.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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"Moonbeams
Illuminate
Redemptive hands reaching
Toward blinded souls who can't find
The sun."
*well done. A short but moving piece on depression.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Thank you. Comments are appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Blinded by Darkness, has the proper formatting and finds the metaphor of palms to bring our own needs for reconnection with God to light.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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This cinquain, Blinded by Darkness, has the proper formatting and finds the metaphor of palms to bring our own needs for reconnection with God to light.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. Hugs.
Comment from Wendy G
What a beautiful image ... and also a beautiful poem. The search continues for those who can't find the sun, but still reach out ... and the moon gently illuminates, reflecting the sun, but softer, more gentle. Lovely image.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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What a beautiful image ... and also a beautiful poem. The search continues for those who can't find the sun, but still reach out ... and the moon gently illuminates, reflecting the sun, but softer, more gentle. Lovely image.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Yes! Thank you so much for your lovely comments. Humbly appreciated. Hugs.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Blinded By Darkness
Great entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt contest. I suffer from depression and your poem makes sense to me. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Blinded By Darkness
Great entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt contest. I suffer from depression and your poem makes sense to me. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you. So do I, and I'm glad you could understand the poem. Hugs.
Comment from equestrik
This is a good presentation with your well chosen picture to emphasise your writing. This is thought provoking and well put together. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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This is a good presentation with your well chosen picture to emphasise your writing. This is thought provoking and well put together. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Hugs.
Comment from papa55mike
Depression is a pit where the sun can't find you, and grabbing hold is the only way out. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Depression is a pit where the sun can't find you, and grabbing hold is the only way out. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you! I appreciate your complementary and supportive review and comments. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Your poem depicts the long-lost soul that can never find its way out of the darkness but linger forever under the shadows of moonbeams that never go away. I like the picture. It speaks loudly enhancing your words. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Your poem depicts the long-lost soul that can never find its way out of the darkness but linger forever under the shadows of moonbeams that never go away. I like the picture. It speaks loudly enhancing your words. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much. Your kind review is greatly appreciated. Hugs.
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
I think you've penned a very intriguing cinquain entry here.
It is in great form and I especially like the last three lines.
Your two entry lines set the tone very well.
"Blinded By Darkness" is a well chosen title as well
as your description and photo choice.
Best wishes in the contest,
Anna
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Poet,
I think you've penned a very intriguing cinquain entry here.
It is in great form and I especially like the last three lines.
Your two entry lines set the tone very well.
"Blinded By Darkness" is a well chosen title as well
as your description and photo choice.
Best wishes in the contest,
Anna
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Wow. Thank you so much for your complementary comments and rating. It is humbly appreciate it. Hugs and blessings.
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You're welcome.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, clear and creative. I pondered on
the thought when one can't see light and how it effects depression.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork compliments these
words.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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The author's words are interesting, clear and creative. I pondered on
the thought when one can't see light and how it effects depression.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork compliments these
words.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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I'm glad my words made you think. That's my favorite thing about poetry! Thank you so much for the time you spent to read and review. It is humbly appreciate it. Hugs.
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I'm glad my words made you think. That's my favorite thing about poetry! Thank you so much for the time you spent to read and review. It is humbly appreciate it. Hugs.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Depression is a terrible and devastating affliction and can destroy someone's positivity and forward path. I have seen it happen and during this period in history many people have suffered from it, your words describe it perfectly here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Depression is a terrible and devastating affliction and can destroy someone's positivity and forward path. I have seen it happen and during this period in history many people have suffered from it, your words describe it perfectly here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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It is a very common affliction made even more complicated and prevalent by the lack of compassion of others. Thank you for your supportive comments. Hugs.