sun~kissed
cinquain4 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Thanks Raul, I see that you are doing well with contests, all the best, j
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You're welcome and thank you!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Springtime brings out the beauty of the Earth. It's a time of new things, bright beginnings, and renewal of what was the past. The bright sun and beautiful flowers bring freshness to us all. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Springtime brings out the beauty of the Earth. It's a time of new things, bright beginnings, and renewal of what was the past. The bright sun and beautiful flowers bring freshness to us all. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the insightful review Patty. I went for a nice walk and yes spring is here. Beautiful sunshine, I had to leave my coat on a tree for a bit.
Wish you well, cheers, j
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is goodo.
-You have a good topic
and spring images with birds,
bees, flowers, and more.
-I like your opening and
closing, too.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is goodo.
-You have a good topic
and spring images with birds,
bees, flowers, and more.
-I like your opening and
closing, too.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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argh MORE COFFEE. Not sure what I was thinking, thanks for the heads up and review. Yes, please check back later haha j
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You now have a new rating and review! Very well done. You are welcome for the 'heads up'!
Comment from equestrik
Yes, mud season! We are heading into thisseason now as the snow mwlts and the rain comes. It sure can be a mess out here with the horses but I love the coming of spring.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Yes, mud season! We are heading into thisseason now as the snow mwlts and the rain comes. It sure can be a mess out here with the horses but I love the coming of spring.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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I bet the horses are so happy to get out and run in the sun after a long winter. Thanks for the review and think spring. j
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yes, they love having some time to njoy the sun but are not as thrilled about the mud!
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I can imagine. Big clumps of mud slowing them down. j