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Comment from PoemsOfDD
Debra, this short fifteen syllable contest entry is finely crafted and makes good use of limited syllables to grab the attention of the reader. I'd love to be sitting on that bench right now looking at such a pretty pink sky. Well done and good luck. ~DD
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Debra, this short fifteen syllable contest entry is finely crafted and makes good use of limited syllables to grab the attention of the reader. I'd love to be sitting on that bench right now looking at such a pretty pink sky. Well done and good luck. ~DD
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, DD, for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written fifteen syllable poem. Reflected hues dance upon rippling tide -best seat in the house. Really beautiful photo to compliment your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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This is a nicely written fifteen syllable poem. Reflected hues dance upon rippling tide -best seat in the house. Really beautiful photo to compliment your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent write, Debra. Let the show begin, and with the best seat in the house an epic is about to unfold.
A fine entry into this contest and I wish you great luck with the Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Excellent write, Debra. Let the show begin, and with the best seat in the house an epic is about to unfold.
A fine entry into this contest and I wish you great luck with the Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, Gloria :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful image and
nice presentation, Debra.
-You have used your 15
syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and personification
that create a vivid word picture of the scene.
-A very good closing line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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-Beautiful image and
nice presentation, Debra.
-You have used your 15
syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and personification
that create a vivid word picture of the scene.
-A very good closing line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both :)
Kind regards, Debra
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You are very welcome, Debra.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Sundown's Stage
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
Beautiful entry for the 15 Syllable Poem contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines...it flows well. Wonderful words' imagery and presentation.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Sundown's Stage
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
Beautiful entry for the 15 Syllable Poem contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines...it flows well. Wonderful words' imagery and presentation.
Gypsy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Hello Gypsy,
Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback and generous star rating. It means a lot :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful tranquil image and I have seen the most wonderful views in my lifetime and caught most of them on camera. You describe the dancing sea in ambient hues here Debra, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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A beautiful tranquil image and I have seen the most wonderful views in my lifetime and caught most of them on camera. You describe the dancing sea in ambient hues here Debra, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Dolly, I appreciate it :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightfully clever--Kudos for opening the show with such a whimsical title. "Sundown's stage" and the punchline "best seat in the house" brilliantly sandwich the dance imagery.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Delightfully clever--Kudos for opening the show with such a whimsical title. "Sundown's stage" and the punchline "best seat in the house" brilliantly sandwich the dance imagery.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Liz, I appreciate it :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from royowen
This would have qualified in any Haiku contest, and been a winner what's more, but is still superbly written, with that great satori line thrown in for good measure, well done, good job Debra, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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This would have qualified in any Haiku contest, and been a winner what's more, but is still superbly written, with that great satori line thrown in for good measure, well done, good job Debra, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes, Roy, I appreciate both :) Best wishes, Debra
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Most welcome
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of your fifteen syllables in this lovely poem, vividly describing an awesome moment in nature, to be enjoyed from the "best seat . . . "
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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You have made effective use of your fifteen syllables in this lovely poem, vividly describing an awesome moment in nature, to be enjoyed from the "best seat . . . "
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your kind feedback, best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Cogitator
Sights like this make us appreciate how much more beautiful Mother Earth is compared to its human inhabitants. Great and calming view, for sure....John
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Sights like this make us appreciate how much more beautiful Mother Earth is compared to its human inhabitants. Great and calming view, for sure....John
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, John, I appreciate it :) Best wishes, Debra