"The Book of Death"
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Bits and Pieces (A)"Is the living really alive and living?
2 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a series of strange open thoughts running into each other, following each other, perhaps even chasing each other. However it flows very well, and somehow has coherence. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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This is a series of strange open thoughts running into each other, following each other, perhaps even chasing each other. However it flows very well, and somehow has coherence. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thanks for your review of My strange open thoughts but that's just me and my own grandiose world just like this is a run-in sentence and as I'm talking it I'm looking for grammar problems.
Have a nice day
Doctor Ricky 1024
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it wasn't a criticism. On the contrary, as I wrote, well done.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The show must go on, Monday to Sunday on repeat with some sun in the middle:"
'Slivers of past Glass are still collecting inside!'
Hmm of me!'
'Dear Lord God.'
'W been fhat will be will be is there any place I can hide the miserable Mondays followed by the freaky Fridays always but one after another?'" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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The show must go on, Monday to Sunday on repeat with some sun in the middle:"
'Slivers of past Glass are still collecting inside!'
Hmm of me!'
'Dear Lord God.'
'W been fhat will be will be is there any place I can hide the miserable Mondays followed by the freaky Fridays always but one after another?'" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you again for sharing and visiting!
Doctor Ricky 1024