The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "A Frozen Cold Soul"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from patcelaw
During this pandemic I am finding that so many are becoming cold toward others. Too much of this will cause us to have cold hearts.
Patricia
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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During this pandemic I am finding that so many are becoming cold toward others. Too much of this will cause us to have cold hearts.
Patricia
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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I agree, and really spent time to visualize the different ways that coldness affects people. Thanks again for the Time to Read, Rate and Review this poem offering.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I liked all the ways you brought out COLD in your poem, so many that it made me read it again. I am not a person who like the cold, so all these versions of it made me shiver. You really did a great job with this, and even though I would have prefered to be warm, I did enjoy reading your poem. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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I liked all the ways you brought out COLD in your poem, so many that it made me read it again. I am not a person who like the cold, so all these versions of it made me shiver. You really did a great job with this, and even though I would have prefered to be warm, I did enjoy reading your poem. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the Time to Read, Rate, and Review this poem offering. I perfer heat also.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This poem is very well written, although I must say it's not the most pleasant thing I've ever read, and leaves me with a clear chill. The rhymes are very clever and you've covered many a situation where the word "cold" comes into play.
Because the poem is so intricately worded, I don't think the fancy font works very well with it; I would rather experience a more straightforward reading.
I do like that you put each instance of the word "cold" in boldface.
I'm not sure what's pictured in the artwork; it looks like half of one thing and half of another. Is that a cake? Is it a picture taken in a bar or tavern?
You have very successfully conveyed a complete feeling of coldness through the words of this poem!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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This poem is very well written, although I must say it's not the most pleasant thing I've ever read, and leaves me with a clear chill. The rhymes are very clever and you've covered many a situation where the word "cold" comes into play.
Because the poem is so intricately worded, I don't think the fancy font works very well with it; I would rather experience a more straightforward reading.
I do like that you put each instance of the word "cold" in boldface.
I'm not sure what's pictured in the artwork; it looks like half of one thing and half of another. Is that a cake? Is it a picture taken in a bar or tavern?
You have very successfully conveyed a complete feeling of coldness through the words of this poem!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Thank you for Reading, Rating and Reviewing this poem offering. I just thought up cold in different contexts. I also tried to infuse gambling issues I've read about using an old Vegas gag photo at Binions LV.
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You're very welcome. May God bless you and keep you warm! - Mary Kay
Comment from Susan Larson
I love how you made so many situations and emotions rhyme with cold. Your grey italics on grey was a little difficult to read, yet very effective in getting across the meaning of cold . I especially liked the answers when being polled. Does anyone
Get a warm fuzzy feeling from a pollster? This is like a grown up version of Mary O'Neill's Hailstones and Hallibut Bones, my favorite children's poetry book. For that you deserve a six.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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I love how you made so many situations and emotions rhyme with cold. Your grey italics on grey was a little difficult to read, yet very effective in getting across the meaning of cold . I especially liked the answers when being polled. Does anyone
Get a warm fuzzy feeling from a pollster? This is like a grown up version of Mary O'Neill's Hailstones and Hallibut Bones, my favorite children's poetry book. For that you deserve a six.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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WOW, Bless you for the Time, Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem offering.
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. The repeating of Cold as the first word in each line reinforces how cold this persons soul has become. Solid rhyme scheme, good ending, nice art work. Great job, wishing you continued success.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Very good. The repeating of Cold as the first word in each line reinforces how cold this persons soul has become. Solid rhyme scheme, good ending, nice art work. Great job, wishing you continued success.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Time to Read, Rate, and, Review this poem. Blessings and Happy Valentine's Day.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your club challenge poem. I enjoyed reading it on this cold day here--8*. I like the monorhyme and the great examples of the many uses of the word cold. Your formatting, color scheme, and image work well.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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You did a great job with your club challenge poem. I enjoyed reading it on this cold day here--8*. I like the monorhyme and the great examples of the many uses of the word cold. Your formatting, color scheme, and image work well.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I Hope it Warms up for you.
Blessings for Your Review.
Comment from Boogienights
Very well written, I can feel the turmoil going on underneath your words, about what gambling can do to bring a person down. Cold is a good description of each of these feelings. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Very well written, I can feel the turmoil going on underneath your words, about what gambling can do to bring a person down. Cold is a good description of each of these feelings. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Time, Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem offering. Continued Blessings to you.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, They are a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem, I think you should at your age
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, They are a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem, I think you should at your age
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you Miss Atkinson, For your Time to Read, Rate, and Reviewing this poem offering. Continued Blessings to you.
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Your very welcome
Cookie
Comment from royowen
I don't we humans fiction well whether it be in the polar extremes, high on a mountain slope, or when we are frozen out of the warmth of human contact and being wanted. You've written a superb, well ordered free verse, articulate and nicely scribed, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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I don't we humans fiction well whether it be in the polar extremes, high on a mountain slope, or when we are frozen out of the warmth of human contact and being wanted. You've written a superb, well ordered free verse, articulate and nicely scribed, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you Sir for your Time, Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem offering. Blessings to you and yours.
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Most welcome