Failed
Contest Entry12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Failed, finds the turning point at the end of this poem as the realization that there is a solvable problem and it starts with us.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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This free verse, Failed, finds the turning point at the end of this poem as the realization that there is a solvable problem and it starts with us.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you have two votes now!
Reading your poem , I could not help but think that not all of us are made to sit in front of a desk ..
Your talent was simply somewhere else : in sports, in art, in music etc
What's important is that we find our talent .
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Ciao mystery poet, you have two votes now!
Reading your poem , I could not help but think that not all of us are made to sit in front of a desk ..
Your talent was simply somewhere else : in sports, in art, in music etc
What's important is that we find our talent .
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thanks! My talent is in writing.
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Well then you are in the right place.
I wish you well in your writing endeavours.
PS: I, m still searching ( sigh)
Keep safe!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
A poem of honesty admitting all the failures. Please don't give up. Life is full of surprises. It is never too late to start it over again.
Happy writing and good luck to your contest.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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A poem of honesty admitting all the failures. Please don't give up. Life is full of surprises. It is never too late to start it over again.
Happy writing and good luck to your contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thanks! Don't worry! I believe in myself! Thanks for the great advice! This entry is for the contest. I'm happy you enjoyed it! Happy writing! :) Thanks again.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author of Failure tell us readers that so many students feel like you said
My failing hasn't ever met its
dividends to a happy career.
My life is a self-fail all the time.
Have a negative attitude about themselves
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Hello author of Failure tell us readers that so many students feel like you said
My failing hasn't ever met its
dividends to a happy career.
My life is a self-fail all the time.
Have a negative attitude about themselves
Gert
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thanks!
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You are welcome Mystery writer
Gert
Comment from Boogienights
This is a terrible situation to be in honestly, but I've been there done that. I went through the same thing in college, but if you make up your mind to pay attention, you can get through it. No one is a failure, they just lack motivation. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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This is a terrible situation to be in honestly, but I've been there done that. I went through the same thing in college, but if you make up your mind to pay attention, you can get through it. No one is a failure, they just lack motivation. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad write as often failure teaches us to be successful. Churchill sad: Success is not final, failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts." "Success is stumbling from failure to failure with no loss of enthusiasm."
We are all good at something, we just need to fine our niche, a fine poem for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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This is a sad write as often failure teaches us to be successful. Churchill sad: Success is not final, failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts." "Success is stumbling from failure to failure with no loss of enthusiasm."
We are all good at something, we just need to fine our niche, a fine poem for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
This is judging yourself as a success or a failure by the standards of others and according to the values of others. Are you a person of integrity? Caring? Compassionate? Truthful? if so, you are a success as a person. Well written. Good wishes.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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This is judging yourself as a success or a failure by the standards of others and according to the values of others. Are you a person of integrity? Caring? Compassionate? Truthful? if so, you are a success as a person. Well written. Good wishes.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thanks! Yes to all those questions! Keep writing!
Comment from Earl Corp
I never took SATs because I was in the Army, I probably wouldn'tt have passed them either. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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I never took SATs because I was in the Army, I probably wouldn'tt have passed them either. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you! Stay safe and healthy to you also, my friend!
Comment from palmart
Let me tell you that a new life starts when we make a good diagnostics. And I guess that your poem describes an inflection point (where curvature changes). So, it is OK to describe a situation as you did in you poem, but let me tell you that brain can be "shortcutted" to another realities, as it cannot difference between something real or something imagined. So, if imagination is taken into the positive side, reality changes magically. Great poem, but person can move to better horizons... For sure!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Let me tell you that a new life starts when we make a good diagnostics. And I guess that your poem describes an inflection point (where curvature changes). So, it is OK to describe a situation as you did in you poem, but let me tell you that brain can be "shortcutted" to another realities, as it cannot difference between something real or something imagined. So, if imagination is taken into the positive side, reality changes magically. Great poem, but person can move to better horizons... For sure!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
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You´re welcome, Author!
Comment from RodG
This person seems like a total wash-out. I'm surprised any college accepted him if he didn't pass his SATs.
Please proofread.
LA LA Land
disobediEnt.
My failingS HAVE NEVER met THEIR
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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This person seems like a total wash-out. I'm surprised any college accepted him if he didn't pass his SATs.
Please proofread.
LA LA Land
disobediEnt.
My failingS HAVE NEVER met THEIR
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thanks!