Dreary Day
A storm is coming5 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
Oh my, Monica.
Given what you have endured with storms, I understand the inspiration behind this well-written write. You painted an image-filled picture of that brewing storm with such few words. Good usage of minimalism.
Good luck in the contest, my friend.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Oh my, Monica.
Given what you have endured with storms, I understand the inspiration behind this well-written write. You painted an image-filled picture of that brewing storm with such few words. Good usage of minimalism.
Good luck in the contest, my friend.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from muffinmama
You found a perfect photo for a dramatic snapshot of not only a coming storm, but also of life in today's world.
Let's all pray for a calming of the waters and a sun-filled future.
This post left its mark.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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You found a perfect photo for a dramatic snapshot of not only a coming storm, but also of life in today's world.
Let's all pray for a calming of the waters and a sun-filled future.
This post left its mark.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clouds/crowd--clever play and a bit of a tongue "twister" apt for the theme! Rain sputtering--brilliant--I can see and hear it. Excellent choice of title--dreary day perfectly underplays what's coming.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Clouds/crowd--clever play and a bit of a tongue "twister" apt for the theme! Rain sputtering--brilliant--I can see and hear it. Excellent choice of title--dreary day perfectly underplays what's coming.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your reviews.
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have chosen good words to portray what it is like before a storm hits. The storm clouds look very ominous. Scary to think of a tornado coming, knowing what destruction it will bring.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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You have chosen good words to portray what it is like before a storm hits. The storm clouds look very ominous. Scary to think of a tornado coming, knowing what destruction it will bring.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
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You are welcome
Comment from Lyn Peters
You capture the menace, in the photo, so thoroughly. Your last line makes me fear for the safety of the boats (not to mention the folks who are potentially in the tornado's path). Thank you for sharing your work. I look forward to reading more in the future.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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You capture the menace, in the photo, so thoroughly. Your last line makes me fear for the safety of the boats (not to mention the folks who are potentially in the tornado's path). Thank you for sharing your work. I look forward to reading more in the future.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.