Comment from Laurie Holding

Exceptional

This piece is inspiring to me! I read it twice, once aloud, and must tell you that while the artwork initially confused me, that second read did the trick, and I'm throwing six stars your way. Great work! And you have my vote.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021

Thanks for the encouraging review and shiny stars Laurie. Not my usual style haha, cheers, j

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

This is a scene at he bar. It was well written. I cn see it happening in the bar. the ending is a good surprise. Like it: "Listen buddy, you don't have to go home, but you can't stay here."

Thank you for sharing your story.

Good luck ...

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021

Thanks for the review, cheers.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-hundred-word story, Anywhere But Here, has the proper word count and seems to find the former Prez coming to terms with bar time in the real world.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021

Hah you always get it. Thanks for the review Bill, cheers

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry. You did a good job describing the situation and the resolution. I bet that rude customer was taken aback--hopefully he left immediately.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes, Jan

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021

Thanks for the review Jan