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Walter Asks God

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Comment from Goodadvicechan
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I like this poem and Like the ending sentence: "God has answered: Yes, Walter."

I also like the answer from the preacher: "I'll make sure that he gets it."

Happy writing and good luck to your contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
    Thanks! I hope I win.
Comment from tfawcus
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Having just listened to the new president's inaugural speech and the recitation of Amanda Gorman' poem composed for the occasion, I am inclined to think that there is new hope that Walter's prayer may indeed be answered.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
    Thanks! I think so also.
Comment from Mia Twysted
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I am left to wonder what was in the letter that he took to that church. And the higher power that allowed the preacher to accept it for the holy spirits for which it was intended.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
    Thanks!