Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Very Cool picture you chose to accompany your poem. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and healthy in the new year.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

Thank you for the read and review.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

What a wonderful naani - I just see it as a thirst for knowledge:"
flapping book pages
bring a vision of
flying wings across
the waving water" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

Thank you for the read and review. May your thirst for knowledge continue to flow.

Comment from Patricia Cammish

Excellent

This is a neat Naani poem perfectly reflecting your chosen, wonderfully surreal,image. Totally complementary .
Just a thought:- you have not used all your syllable allowance, and your last line seems a bit of a cliffhanger....... You could add some sort of conclusion.
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

Thanks for your input. I will consider your thought.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I enjoyed the fresh imagery of how turning book pages evoked a concept of escape, thoughts taking flight, travel, imagination etc. The waving water is either beckoning a welcome, or waving goodbye.
That illustration is gorgeous.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

Thank you for your read and encouraging words.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

I love the picture and the words that you have used to describe it. As an avid reader this resonates with me. As we turn the pages of a book, we can travel to so many wonderful places.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

Thank you for your read and encouraging words.

reply by Anne Johnston on 08-Jan-2021

You are welcome