Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is a good story with actually, an up-beat feel to it. There will always be doomsday theories and theories. At the age of 64, I have lived through many end of the world predictions.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for your encouraging review:)

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

I have three meeting for three hours in each I will be speaking the whole time. *meetings instead of meeting/*in each; did you mean in which I will be speaking Like your image, and is 2021 a good year? I sure am thinking positive.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021

Yes, is going to be an amazing year with God's help

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like your upbeat (even though it's joking) conversation with your co-workers about it being perpetually Friday. Lol. Best wishes in the contest!

I have three meeting (meetings)
just to justify some other people existence. (people's)
on that day my Boss it's off (is instead of it's)
country where they literary eat (literally)

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for your corrections

Comment from Alli Johnston

Excellent

Sad but true that the lasting effects of disaster tend to be hatred towards others. I have never quite thought of it as doomsday though, nor have I heard that relation. Great job piecing those together so nicely!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for your encouraging review and the good luck wishes:) Have a blessed week end:)

Comment from Jaime Deagle

Excellent

Great job on the story. You were able to convey a complete story with it even though it was hort. Thanks for sharing your writing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for your encouraging review and the good luck wishes:) Have a blessed week end:)

Comment from Susan Larson

Excellent

A lot of interesting thoughts here about doomsday. Your mention of Hungarian music tickled me as I grew up with Eastern European music, which all seems to be written in a minor key. So fitting. There are a few typos you might want to fix. Read back over it carefully for punctuation.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021

Thank you:)

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Excellent

Hi mystery writer

Well this is certainly a gloomy doomsday scenario you have written here.
Not really my cup of tea, (I'm British, LOL) but others make love it too bits.
I wish you well in the competition.
Take care and stay safe, Pete

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021

Thank you:)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes, there does seem like there are some different nationalities I several seasons as to who is the most to blame currently, and it seems it could be the Chinese, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : (God could punishing) God would punish us? 2: Don't jump (at) my throat. Down?

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021

Thank you:)

reply by royowen on 11-Jan-2021

Bless you

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written prose about what can lead us to our doom,if the wickedness if the world that try to overpower the glory and greatness of our Savior for their own gain.

Typo
Do you think 2021 will lead as(us) to our Doom?

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021

Hi Sandra, thank you so much for your review and for the corrections.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

A nice lighthearted approach to this contest challenge. In these strange times, if we didn't laugh, we'd have to cry. I hope 'they' don't cancel comedy in 2021. That would be a doomsday indeed.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021

Ha, ha, ha very funny and I do hope they will not cancel the laughter.