A Murder of Crows
Haikuish Tercet 9/6/912 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
this is just a really neat poem that i like alot for the black humor of it; the ending makes me smile. you have a beautiful creativity. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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this is just a really neat poem that i like alot for the black humor of it; the ending makes me smile. you have a beautiful creativity. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
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your welcome
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What beautiful poem: "murder of crows perched on a withered branch
break silence now and then " . Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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What beautiful poem: "murder of crows perched on a withered branch
break silence now and then " . Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
Comment from Bill Schott
This haikuish tercet, A Murder of Crows, has the proper formatting and captures a moment when the obvious situation breaks its silence.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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This haikuish tercet, A Murder of Crows, has the proper formatting and captures a moment when the obvious situation breaks its silence.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from equestrik
Great emotion depicted in your picture choice and it goes well with your writing. Good job matching your writing to your visual and I like the info in your author's notes.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Great emotion depicted in your picture choice and it goes well with your writing. Good job matching your writing to your visual and I like the info in your author's notes.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
Comment from royowen
I like this 9/6/9 haihuish entry in this contest. You should "murder" this contest gypsy, a truly outstanding post, yes, that murder of crows keeps turning up, well done and good luck my friend. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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I like this 9/6/9 haihuish entry in this contest. You should "murder" this contest gypsy, a truly outstanding post, yes, that murder of crows keeps turning up, well done and good luck my friend. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much, Roy, Merry Christmas.
hugs,
gypsy
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Bless you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haikuish tercet about the murder of crows sitting in a tree breaking the silence now and then with a big noice and the drunk passerby calls them a buzz kill.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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A very well-written haikuish tercet about the murder of crows sitting in a tree breaking the silence now and then with a big noice and the drunk passerby calls them a buzz kill.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Thank you, merry Christmas :)
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and Alfred Hitchcock would have been proud of the sight and sound that greeted my eyes and assaulted my ears one day a few years ago when I went for my daily walk around the cul-de-sac; hundred of crows all squawking at the same time. It was unnerving--Merry Christmas
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and Alfred Hitchcock would have been proud of the sight and sound that greeted my eyes and assaulted my ears one day a few years ago when I went for my daily walk around the cul-de-sac; hundred of crows all squawking at the same time. It was unnerving--Merry Christmas
Comment Written 25-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much, Mike. Merry Christmas!
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Do you know why they calle them a murder of crows? These crows give out justice as the investigate a crime and then murder is the sentence! They will kill any threat to their existence. You brought the scene to life here with your clever words, much enjoyed and Merry Christmas to you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Do you know why they calle them a murder of crows? These crows give out justice as the investigate a crime and then murder is the sentence! They will kill any threat to their existence. You brought the scene to life here with your clever words, much enjoyed and Merry Christmas to you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much, Dolly, I didn't know that about crows. I heard a group of ravens is a conspiracy. Merry Christmas to you too.
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Yes, birds know how to dish out the punishments when it is due! Love Dolly x
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Yes, birds know how to dish out the punishments when it is due! Love Dolly x
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant juxtaposition of nature imagery with the unexpected crudeness of a drunk guy. Startling use of murder re crows--I learned that from a prior poem, probably yours. Stunning piece.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Brilliant juxtaposition of nature imagery with the unexpected crudeness of a drunk guy. Startling use of murder re crows--I learned that from a prior poem, probably yours. Stunning piece.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, elizabeth, I really appreciate it. Merry Christmas!
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Comment from lyenochka
Lol. So much "killing" in this Haikuish Tercet (love your new form!) Dean loved that phrase "murder of crows." And I like that you have "murder" in the first line, the killing of silence in the second line and "buzzkill" in the last. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Lol. So much "killing" in this Haikuish Tercet (love your new form!) Dean loved that phrase "murder of crows." And I like that you have "murder" in the first line, the killing of silence in the second line and "buzzkill" in the last. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review, Helen. Yes, Dean loved it. He told me about it. Now whenever I write about crows I think of him.
Merry Christmas!!
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