Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Dangerous Enemies"multi-author book number two
15 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Excellent poem.
You certainly can associate them to our pandemic. We lost 300,000 Americans. How many more? We need the vaccines to save us.
May God help us.
I love this piece writing.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Excellent poem.
You certainly can associate them to our pandemic. We lost 300,000 Americans. How many more? We need the vaccines to save us.
May God help us.
I love this piece writing.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this great review. Much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed. I agree we desperately need a way out of this poorly understood pandemic. Despite (or maybe because of) poor understanding I can't help writing about it every so often. Stay Safe. Katherine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 7/7 poem in addition to the multi-author Renga book about the virus that brings more questions than answers and we seem not to reach the end of it yet.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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A very well-written 7/7 poem in addition to the multi-author Renga book about the virus that brings more questions than answers and we seem not to reach the end of it yet.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thank you or reviewing and for your encouragement
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Although a serious matter (or matters), your use of the play on mites/mights is a fun one in this great addition! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, Lady Kat -- and good to see your smile again! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Although a serious matter (or matters), your use of the play on mites/mights is a fun one in this great addition! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, Lady Kat -- and good to see your smile again! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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thank you for reading and reviewing. Good to see you again too.
Kate
PS I may be smiling, but I am seriously submerged at the moment
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Dangerous Enemies
by Katherine M. Kean
Hello, Katherine,
Excellent entry for the renga book. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too. Mites are terribly annoying. Well done! Thank you very much for adding a chapter.
Hugs,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Dangerous Enemies
by Katherine M. Kean
Hello, Katherine,
Excellent entry for the renga book. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too. Mites are terribly annoying. Well done! Thank you very much for adding a chapter.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review, and for feeling able to back up your words with the much sought after sixth star.
Love, Katherine xx
Comment from Janetsue
Your posting is very meaningful to me, Katherine, because I am allergic to dust mites--dead or alive. They are everywhere and we cannot escape them. Your two-line poem says a lot in just a few words. Thank you for sharing!
(Hope you are well and safe this holiday season and that the joy it offers will fill your heart.)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Your posting is very meaningful to me, Katherine, because I am allergic to dust mites--dead or alive. They are everywhere and we cannot escape them. Your two-line poem says a lot in just a few words. Thank you for sharing!
(Hope you are well and safe this holiday season and that the joy it offers will fill your heart.)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this fine review, I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Do your allergies mean that my authors notes are wrong and I should tone down the not lethal?
I am still in France, unable to join my parents. It's tragic. So unfortunately I am not really looking forward to the holiday season (which is hard on my poor daughter).
Comment from Bill Schott
This couplet, Dangerous Enemies, for the renga, takes the unseen enemies concept to the actual unseeable creatures that invade and are hard to eradicate.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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This couplet, Dangerous Enemies, for the renga, takes the unseen enemies concept to the actual unseeable creatures that invade and are hard to eradicate.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you Bill for this fine review
Comment from Boogienights
Because we never know what lurks around the corner, our fear is multiplied by not being able to see it. This pandemic changed the world, but won't keep us down. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Because we never know what lurks around the corner, our fear is multiplied by not being able to see it. This pandemic changed the world, but won't keep us down. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading this poem and reviewing.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Katherine.
Using the category of dangerous enemies, your two verses are well done. I particularly like the use of homonyms in the second verse. That makes the reader pay attention.
Robert
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Hello Katherine.
Using the category of dangerous enemies, your two verses are well done. I particularly like the use of homonyms in the second verse. That makes the reader pay attention.
Robert
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for finding the time to review, and for your words of encouragement. Appreciated as always. Your friend Katherine.
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You're welcome. Have a Merry Christmas.
Robert
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You too and all your family
Comment from padumachitta
hello
I do not know this style, so read about it a bit.
Thanks for that.
I like this for the double meanings and the play on homophones.
I hope aou are not in a Teir 4 area...
please
Stay safe
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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hello
I do not know this style, so read about it a bit.
Thanks for that.
I like this for the double meanings and the play on homophones.
I hope aou are not in a Teir 4 area...
please
Stay safe
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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I'm glad you were able to learn about this form of poetry from what was originally a launch by Gypsy Blue Rose.
And thank you for your concern.
Katherine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This commentary and philosophy Renga poem speaks a candid comment telling about the nature of the mites, dangerous enemies to man in our current world, well said, well done, thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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This commentary and philosophy Renga poem speaks a candid comment telling about the nature of the mites, dangerous enemies to man in our current world, well said, well done, thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reviewing, it's always appreciated.