The Dip
A Quadrilew poem24 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvonne.
I know absolutely nothing about the poetry style, but I do know about onion dip. I used to read it on potato chips.
Your story in this poem is not about onion dip, it's about onions that are dipping, and dancing. It is a clever play on words.
Robert
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Hello Yvonne.
I know absolutely nothing about the poetry style, but I do know about onion dip. I used to read it on potato chips.
Your story in this poem is not about onion dip, it's about onions that are dipping, and dancing. It is a clever play on words.
Robert
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you. I couldn't resist it once I saw the picture.
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The picture is cool.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
i love the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
you captured my attention from the first line to the last.
what a delightful read.
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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i love the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
you captured my attention from the first line to the last.
what a delightful read.
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you so much.
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Your very welcome. take care
cookie
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Dip, presented in quatrains, is a funny and clever verse that keeps the pun in the French onion dip..........
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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This poem, The Dip, presented in quatrains, is a funny and clever verse that keeps the pun in the French onion dip..........
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you. That's a great compliment coming from you. 8-)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh my goodness -- what a technical 'follow the recipe' format you've presented, my lady!! ;) But the best thing of all is that the verse was so easy and the rhyme so natural that I didn't even realize it was so until I got to your author notes -- awesome!! ;) :) Thanx so much for the 'dippy' fun, Yvonne! ;) Yvette (the sometimes dippy blonde - lol!)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Oh my goodness -- what a technical 'follow the recipe' format you've presented, my lady!! ;) But the best thing of all is that the verse was so easy and the rhyme so natural that I didn't even realize it was so until I got to your author notes -- awesome!! ;) :) Thanx so much for the 'dippy' fun, Yvonne! ;) Yvette (the sometimes dippy blonde - lol!)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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I'm glad you thought it was fun. That was my intention. Thank you so much.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Thanks for introducing us to a Quadrilew poem (the form I am yet to try). Very engaging, with the imagery and the rhymes and the visuals. Excellent presentation and artwork. Your French onion dip made me hungry (smile), but I don't have any in the house.
Thank you for sharing, it was fun.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thanks for introducing us to a Quadrilew poem (the form I am yet to try). Very engaging, with the imagery and the rhymes and the visuals. Excellent presentation and artwork. Your French onion dip made me hungry (smile), but I don't have any in the house.
Thank you for sharing, it was fun.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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It made me hungry, too, and I don't have any either. lol. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Sanku
Quadrilew -This is the first time i am coming across it .very interesting .There is a distinct 'lilt' as i read it aloud -the alliteration with 'l' sound Increases the enjoyment of the poem
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Quadrilew -This is the first time i am coming across it .very interesting .There is a distinct 'lilt' as i read it aloud -the alliteration with 'l' sound Increases the enjoyment of the poem
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from JLR
A frolicking and very merry presentation, You always rise above the challenge of each club offering, I find your presentations always very exact in the each challenge and I learn so much form your offerings and I m in debt of thanks to you, JLR
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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A frolicking and very merry presentation, You always rise above the challenge of each club offering, I find your presentations always very exact in the each challenge and I learn so much form your offerings and I m in debt of thanks to you, JLR
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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What a lovely thing to say. Thank you. I appreciate your words and your review always.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Quadrilew about the French onion dip that will make a relationship bloom with dance and fun all day long. A good dance partner is what we need to make our lives more fun.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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A very well-written Quadrilew about the French onion dip that will make a relationship bloom with dance and fun all day long. A good dance partner is what we need to make our lives more fun.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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So true. Maybe we can imagine we're dancing. 8-)
Comment from June Sargent
I really enjoyed your quadrilew for the potlatch challenge! It's tongue in cheek style is perfect for this format. I do love onion dip myself and can picture the dance - hip to hip. Or, dip to lip...on some chips.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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I really enjoyed your quadrilew for the potlatch challenge! It's tongue in cheek style is perfect for this format. I do love onion dip myself and can picture the dance - hip to hip. Or, dip to lip...on some chips.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Right! It made me hungry for dip and chips, too. Thanks, June.
Comment from Gloria ....
Yes, this is a fine poem, Yvonne. French onion dip is a new dance and you have most poetically and with great grace captured each step right down to the grand finale.
Love this poetic form too, and you have done it great justice. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Yes, this is a fine poem, Yvonne. French onion dip is a new dance and you have most poetically and with great grace captured each step right down to the grand finale.
Love this poetic form too, and you have done it great justice. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you. That means a lot to me.