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Comment from dragonpoet
Jesse,
This virus seems to to fighting everything we do to combat it. It has been here too long. The scientists have tried their best, but we need to find a way to put this to an end so we don't have to live in doubt so much.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Well done.
Joan
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Jesse,
This virus seems to to fighting everything we do to combat it. It has been here too long. The scientists have tried their best, but we need to find a way to put this to an end so we don't have to live in doubt so much.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Well done.
Joan
Comment Written 23-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Yes, Joan, I too am worried, about the pandemic. And the Delta Variant that seems to be creeping into our neighborhoods. But alas, we need to count on the politicians to bail us out, once again. I am staying as healthy as I can and, I hope you do the same, my friend.
Take care and stay safe,
Jesse
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I am vaccinated and am doing fine, so far. I'll do whatever is the safest thing for everyone concerned.
Joan
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Ah yes, everyone thinks they know what's best as they presume to know the story of another, a presumption that is often incorrect and egotistical. Everyone's story is different and acceptance is key. Great thoughts, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Ah yes, everyone thinks they know what's best as they presume to know the story of another, a presumption that is often incorrect and egotistical. Everyone's story is different and acceptance is key. Great thoughts, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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I wrote this one with great passion and knew, or thought I knew, that those who offered me continual advice would become defensive. I was right, but only to a point. My best advisor has helped me to see that acceptance is crucial the more dependent one becomes. Thank you for this excellent review and rating.
Jesse
Comment from MissMerri
I like this poem very much Jesse. I am sometimes blown away by the wisdom of your words. In this poem I also liked very much the creative rhyme pattern. It is very musical and pleasant to the ear. All in all, a most delightful poem.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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I like this poem very much Jesse. I am sometimes blown away by the wisdom of your words. In this poem I also liked very much the creative rhyme pattern. It is very musical and pleasant to the ear. All in all, a most delightful poem.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Miss Merri. I value your opinion highly. I appreciate your kind and thoughtful comments very much. I am glad you enjoyed it, and it sounded musical to you.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from JudyE
The last verse of your poem really spoke to me. I liked the rhythm and the concept of 'treating oneself kindly'. Some people beat themselves up mercilessly which never helps.
I hope you have an enjoyable festive season.
Judy
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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The last verse of your poem really spoke to me. I liked the rhythm and the concept of 'treating oneself kindly'. Some people beat themselves up mercilessly which never helps.
I hope you have an enjoyable festive season.
Judy
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Judy. Thanks for your kind comments, and I agree that some folks beat themselves up rather than learn from their mistakes or mishaps. Have a wonderful holiday season, with hopeful promise for the New Year, 2021!
Jesse
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Preach to the Preachers
by Jesse James Doty
Hello, Jesse,
Nice poem about the virus and people who preach about it. I go with the scientists and medical experts advice.
Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Preach to the Preachers
by Jesse James Doty
Hello, Jesse,
Nice poem about the virus and people who preach about it. I go with the scientists and medical experts advice.
Well done my friend.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your insightful perspective on the virus, and, I too, trust the scientists to know that the new vaccine is safe and effective. Your kind words are very appreciated.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Wendy G
This is a thoughtful and thought-provoking poem. It considers the themes of wisdom and truth and their presentation in relationships, and in how to live life. Beautiful image!
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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This is a thoughtful and thought-provoking poem. It considers the themes of wisdom and truth and their presentation in relationships, and in how to live life. Beautiful image!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Wendy, for this insightful and caring review. You touch on the themes adeptly and with kindness in your words, which I so appreciate. This is an excellent review, and I thank you for supporting my choice of image for the piece.
Merry Christmas to you!
Jesse
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very wise and with much insight, poem. It is a foregone conclusion as far as I'm concerned, that we know what is best for us and how to behave, far better than some distant bureaucrat. I conduct my life in the safest manner that I know and will not risk it. So, you are right.
Ralf
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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A very wise and with much insight, poem. It is a foregone conclusion as far as I'm concerned, that we know what is best for us and how to behave, far better than some distant bureaucrat. I conduct my life in the safest manner that I know and will not risk it. So, you are right.
Ralf
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your kind comments, with the answer to how we take personal responsibility for our actions as the only way to help ourselves and help others. I love how you 'get' what I was saying.
Have a happy holiday season, and may you prosper in the coming New Year.
Jesse
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Thanks for this thoughtful response.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
This is really beautiful. What an amazing photo. A miraculous photo.
There is a big departure in positionality between Stanza 1 and the rest of the poem.
Stanza 1 reminds me of Wisdom standing at the cross roads shouting to anyone passing by, anyone who will listen, "Come this way." "Share in my preparations for your well-being. Yes, the well-being of the whole world." "Do any of you hear me? Is anyone listening?"
Then there is a shift to a human perspective, where reason and logic have now entered the conversation. Of course, no solution will be forthcoming now.
But treating oneself kindly, and others as well, is such an excellent starting place for change. Although, I do not agree with "gingerly." Maybe at first, but then it must progress to lavishly :)
Well done!
Lucy
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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This is really beautiful. What an amazing photo. A miraculous photo.
There is a big departure in positionality between Stanza 1 and the rest of the poem.
Stanza 1 reminds me of Wisdom standing at the cross roads shouting to anyone passing by, anyone who will listen, "Come this way." "Share in my preparations for your well-being. Yes, the well-being of the whole world." "Do any of you hear me? Is anyone listening?"
Then there is a shift to a human perspective, where reason and logic have now entered the conversation. Of course, no solution will be forthcoming now.
But treating oneself kindly, and others as well, is such an excellent starting place for change. Although, I do not agree with "gingerly." Maybe at first, but then it must progress to lavishly :)
Well done!
Lucy
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Lucy, for your in-depth commentary on my piece. I appreciate the time and effort you put into writing what came up for you while reading this. Thank you for your kind words, and for the excellent rating.
Merry Christmas to you!
Jesse
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
Love this poem ! We are all so confused by the covid virus that everyone is so stressed and some are lashing out because we can not get any straight answers we are depending on the words of uncertain news ! But we can not give in we must hold are heads up and smile and be kind and love each other no hate show love in any way possible ! Thank you for sharing :)
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Love this poem ! We are all so confused by the covid virus that everyone is so stressed and some are lashing out because we can not get any straight answers we are depending on the words of uncertain news ! But we can not give in we must hold are heads up and smile and be kind and love each other no hate show love in any way possible ! Thank you for sharing :)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Carmen, for your insightful and compassionate review. Your analysis of the current situation facing our country, is so true, (in my estimation), and hopefully, we can show each other love, instead of hate, as we deal with these difficult issues. Thank you for this excellent rating and review.
Merry Christmas to you!
Jesse
Comment from Carlos' girl
just wonderful, Jesse. the last stanza is the kicker; great hopeful ending. even your choice of yellow background gives air if optimism or hope. cancers/answers is a good rhyme and there are other well done rhymes
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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just wonderful, Jesse. the last stanza is the kicker; great hopeful ending. even your choice of yellow background gives air if optimism or hope. cancers/answers is a good rhyme and there are other well done rhymes
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020
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XOXO.
Happy Holidays.
Jesse
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you too. stay well
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Thanks.